u/Big_Duty4892

first poem I wrote

Her hair flows gentle as a waterfall and yet
she almost always keeps it tucked in a bonnet
Some days, I swear she's a poetry i can't quite read
a sweet ache in my chest, that feels like love i almost need

But on those days, she lets those luscious locks loose
i swear she got me singing the blues

her hazel eyes sparkle like caramel kissed by the sun
And one look from her is enough to leave me undone
A quiet kind of magic the sweetest i've ever heard

But when she lifts those fringes of night and lets her true gaze shine through
i swear those hazel eyes break me down in ways she never knew

Her smile starts like a secret she hasn't decided to reveal
A Quiet curve that breaks when our eyes meet
She tries to stay composed but the moment our eyes meet the calm just slips
Like something in her decides it's safe to let the laughter spill past her lips

And in those moments, I'm reminded of things i never planned to feel
Not loud, ....... just enough that i know it's real

The gold on her ears hold a borrowed fire
But she eclipses godly ichor rising even higher
Her beauty could be compared to a goddess
yet even the goddess would grow jealous

her mind drafts monuments with a sculptor's careful hand
Arranging dreams like pillars only she can understand

it is a bit of a mess, I know. its just my thoughts on her whenever I used to see her. It is I think 4 months of combined writing. first time I have written a poem no clue if it is good but please do tell

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