Offering 3 free secondary essay edits this week — recently accepted DO student paying it forward
I just got accepted to Rocky Vista University’s Montana College of Osteopathic Medicine, and I want to pay it forward while my own essays are still fresh in my head.
I spent months grinding through TMDSAS and AACOMAS secondaries across a wide range of programs — MSOM, RVU-MCOM, JABSOM, Loma Linda, CNUCOM, William Carey, UA-Tucson, and several others. I’ve got a clear sense of what each school’s mission is actually looking for and where most drafts go wrong.
A bit about me: former software engineer (Medtronic, Charles Schwab, SwRI), medical scribe and MA in primary care/geriatrics, currently doing HRV research at an integrative medicine institute. Non-traditional path, so I’ve thought a lot about how to tell a coherent application story when your background isn’t linear.
I’m offering free secondary edits to 3 people this week in exchange for honest feedback on the process. DM me with:
• The school + the prompt
• Your current draft
• A couple sentences about your overall application context
Happy to also answer general secondary/personal statement questions in the comments — secondary season is brutal and I remember the panic well.