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Title: Stories we tell

Format: Feature Screenplay

Page Length: 17

Genres: Thriller, Mystery

Logline: When a perceptive young woman returns to her rich coastal hometown for an old friend’s funeral, she is trapped overnight on a tidal island with their old friend group, where rising tensions, worsening weather, and buried guilt force her to question what really happened to him.

Feedback Concerns: Does this read as a set up for a thriller? Do the characters have distinct voices? Have I set up who the antagonist will be? Is the pacing too fast? Any formatting issues. Honestly, any and all feedback is appreciated :)

Google drive link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1l9HDSIr6egpRkDzRd7jlxvBGqw67hmci/view?usp=drive_link

Logline: When a perceptive young woman returns to her rich coastal hometown for an old friend’s funeral, she is trapped overnight on a tidal island with their old friend group, where rising tensions, worsening weather, and buried guilt force her to question what really happened to him.

Feedback Concerns: Does this read as a set up for a thriller? Do the characters have distinct voices? Have I set up who the antagonist will be? Is the pacing too fast? Any formatting issues. Honestly, any and all feedback is appreciated :)

Google drive link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1l9HDSIr6egpRkDzRd7jlxvBGqw67hmci/view?usp=drive_link

Title: Stories we tell

Format: Feature Length Screenplay

Page Length: 17

Genres: Thriller, Mystery

Logline: When a perceptive young woman returns to her rich coastal hometown for an old friend’s funeral, she is trapped overnight on a tidal island with their old friend group, where rising tensions, worsening weather, and buried guilt force her to question what really happened to him.

Feedback Concerns: Does this read as a set up for a thriller? Do the characters have distinct voices? Have I set up who the antagonist will be? Is the pacing too fast? Any formatting issues. Honestly, any and all feedback is appreciated :)

Google drive link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1l9HDSIr6egpRkDzRd7jlxvBGqw67hmci/view?usp=drive_link

Title: Stories we tell

Format: Feature

Page Length: 17

Genres: Thriller, Mystery

Logline: When a perceptive young woman returns to her rich coastal hometown for an old friend’s funeral, she is trapped overnight on a tidal island with their old friend group, where rising tensions, worsening weather, and buried guilt force her to question what really happened to him.

Feedback Concerns: Does this read as a set up for a thriller? Do the characters have distinct voices? Have I set up who the antagonist will be? Is the pacing too fast? Any formatting issues. Honestly, any and all feedback is appreciated :)

Google drive link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1l9HDSIr6egpRkDzRd7jlxvBGqw67hmci/view?usp=drive_link