Hello everyone! I (23F) have been working on this novel and concept for the last ten years, and slowly trying to build a realistic developed world to have my story play out in. That being said, the novel is set 600 years in the future with a different government than we have today. It encompasses a lot of characters, it’s long and I have definitively outlined it as a 4 Act story.
With that, I want to know how you feel about the world, are you hooked in, are you confused? How does the writing feel etc. any notes about the genre you feel it may fall into is MUCH APPRECIATED. I don’t know exactly what genre it is.
I’m really looking to get myself published this year and part of that is putting my work out there (which I’m not good at so plz be kind) and getting feedback good or bad.
I’m not only looking for a critique on the chapter (it’s pretty long) but also looking for someone to help me edit the first act as it’s now completed. Comment if you’d be interested and if you want to see where the story is going.