u/GP830

Hi All,

I'm a singer songwriter in the vain of The Decemberists, Sufjan Stevens, Fleet Foxes, Bright Eyes, etc. I am working on getting better at mixing, and this is my latest try. I'm kind of just practicing right now, and plan to add some harmonies and aux percussion on this. A few questions I would like answered for the time being:

Is the bass translating well?

Are the guitars too abrasive/ice picky?

Is the piano too lost in the mud?

Am I 75% there, or closer to 95%?

What would be YOUR next move?

I fear it lacks pop or polish, but perhaps this is just what unmastered mixes are suppose to sound like? Any insight would be greatly appreciated. :)

https://on.soundcloud.com/ziNfmobJK93xsvSGVR

TIA!!!