
A Stepmother Märchen: How Passing the Torch is unfair (Character Analysis)
As per a request, here’s an analysis on an element within “A Stepmother’s Märchen” that I believe deserves some attention and exploration. I will be using a very prevalent dynamic within the story to showcase this element; that has been very vital for the very trajectory the story has always followed.
Shuri von Neuschwanstein was given a duty that came with the role she had been given within the house she adopted the name of. I will be exploring what shape this duty to the name of Neuschwanstein takes, and how it ties back to the 2 most important figures in her life. Without further ado, here is an analysis on the very first chapter. However I will naturally allude to elements that appear upwards to chapter 100, so spoilers be warned.
The story of A Stepmother’s Märchen opens with a sequence this very analysis is predicated on. We are exposed to the circumstances and views that are normal to our protagonist, alongside with the immediate long-/shorterm goals she holds. The abnormality that is Johannes von Neuschwanstein turns the entire trajectory of the story on its head.
He is the first connection that ties our protagonist towards understanding what it means to be involved in the world where people give and take. To give and take is to measure what comes out of the very transaction someone is subject to. Yes. Subject to. No matter how many laws, codes of conducts or even norms are instilled into human beings, everyone is forced into this rule of “give and take” – even children.
We see this within an exchange that is presumably between herself and her mother – she is asked to do better, to specifically move her hands quicker. Her own mother is measuring her child's performance based on either past experiences or the current self who is raising our young protagonist. To measure what she can give, so that she can reasonably speaking, take.
This moment is difficult to see in a positive light. While many may agree that some negative reinforcement can lead towards positive results, that is less than ideal. We see this expressed within her brother Lucas von Ighöfer here, and in the future. Who exhibits many unsavoury qualities as a man from that era. Those qualities can naturally be traced back from how he was raised. He was smarter than our protagonist all things considered.
He knew his place, and knew when to wonder, but not to ask questions. Yet our protagonist who at this stage was but a kid, who wondered and asked, but planned. Yet when she was told by her mother to move her hands quicker, she did not ask why, we do not even see her wonder. What is important is that she has no voice, internally nor externally.
Until she was found with a friend, an equal ally, most importantly a companion. What can be seen here is how they are willing to ponder, rationalise and verbalise how they will enter the world of give and take. However as noted; even children are subject to this rule of give and take – what makes the abnormal Johannes special amongst the presented figures? He saw what we did. Her.
It is that he is not just subject to, but has embarked on a quest to give and take himself. To measure his worth and that of others. So when does such a quest begin? When does someone know they are ready to embark?
The funny thing is.
They don't.
It's purely by sheer chance that someone is ready and immediately enters the world they are preparing for. A parent is supposed to guide, ask and engage with their child, yet her own mother does not. She never peers into what Johannes has installed for Shuri. She eagerly sends her child away and does not wonder why she protested. She made a mistake in the eyes of the story. Unlike our Stepmother Shuri, she lost what could ever connect her with her own daughter. To wonder, to ask and finally to plan together. To see.
No caution in the face of greed
She failed her duty as a mother, and did not prepare her daughter for what is to come. Luckily, Shuri was dumb. Unlike her brother, in the eyes of her mother, one can assume that she was inept and that is exactly what made her survive for so long. She retained dearly what was supposed to be discarded.
To now dispel an idea that may have settled but has not been clear – our protagonist is not dumb. She in actuality is quite adept at reasoning, yet lacks the capacity to act on what she had not seen. Her mother, her family, made a choice but they did not plan. They assumed that the position their youngest would hold would benefit them.
He was truly measuring her worth
Johannes came with a plan, a plan no one could truly measure, yet in contrast the Ighöfer’s had none and there was nothing to be measured. They were, completely so, taken advantage of by someone who is truly adept at giving and taking. Is it unfair? Yes. However, they always have the opportunity to adapt, but they never did. They sat and waited, they saw but never acted.
Following these events, Shuri swears to never talk about beans again. The beginnings of her plans and what they will grow to become. This is where the well had begun to be poisoned. Johannes asks Shuri something important following this, to climb stairs that she sees no end to. She is asked to commit to something but is unable to measure the distance she has to travel. Yet he believes in her, for reasons that should become more and more clear.
She begins to hide her visions for the future, closing her heart ever so slightly
We see her ask, but there was no plan, no vision
He saw what no one else could, yet hardship is never perfectly measured
Her quality, her ability to perform is now being put to a test. The twins ask her twice how she could be so weak? She could only be fake – be fraudulent. To further add to this, a prank of little consequence was initiated by the second oldest, she lost her composure, the single most important quality found when making decisions. No matter the pain, grief or even in sadness one must not waver but remain steadfast.
And steadfast she is, for duty came naturally to her - Unfortunately so
Even when something new comes she doesn't yield - Unfortunately so
Lastly, the reason for why she even took on this deal. Her integrity is being questioned. Challenged by the eldest who cannot help but embody the doubts that can be found within this family. What exists behind performance, and duty. Jeremy von Neuschwanstein is asking why he was not burdened with the responsibility of looking after his own father. For his father should know that he cares. He felt like he was ready, but as said, it rarely comes to you when you ask for it.
The passing of the torch.
This element takes so many shapes and forms within this story, some may bond over a shared experience with this element, some may resent each other for having either experienced the same way or in different ways, and finally for having not experienced it at all.
We see this from how Johannes passes the opportunity towards the youngest two, who passes it towards the second eldest and how the second eldest passes to the eldest. The duty to challenge who will become their mother and whether she is even worthy. Whether she can perform the duty of becoming their mother. It is unfair. Why must she prove it? It is because they don't know.
In fact, we see that she had wondered whether or not she’d be capable of this feat. To close the gap between herself and those supposedly closest to her – her companions, her new found family. It seemed far more insurmountable than those endless flights of stairs.
A duty she could seemingly never perform which seals their fate
Johannes gave Shuri his torch, for what she has that the children could learn from. From where she succeeded and from where she failed. However, where does that leave the eldest? The eldest who hears but only the whispers of those who cannot do anything but sit and wait, with their very integrity being compromised? Jeremey von Neuschwanstein is not ready. Not now.
There was no vision for him, only doubts clouded his judgment
Responsibility, which asks humans to perform duties that we are not always aware of, which can only be measured by the guilt that the children felt once the dust had already settled, will always reap what it asked for. Oftentimes, in the form of tragedy. Which she mostly evades, for everyone but herself. A feat Johannes himself could presumably not guarantee.
That is the gift that lies within Shuri von Neuschwanstein: her life will never be easy, even when she is given a second chance. Maybe it's another life? Maybe it was a premonition in the form of a dream? Maybe foresight so great it could only be called clairvoyance? Who knows, but what can be said for certain is that in the world where give and take is the sole measurement humans can place their trust in people, but also find themselves most wary of at the same time – Shuri von Neuschwanstein must rise to the occasion and avoid tragedy. For the sake of the unjust duty she was given and asked to perform.
To stop remaining dormant, and grow
She will always preserve but it is not certain whether it will lead her to her own demise. Survival is never truly on her mind. Performance is the sole quality that is left, which will leave her with nothing. In the absence of performance and duty, who is Shuri von Neuschwanstein? She could only be not human, an evil power hungry fiend, a witch that must be slain. A mistake in human form, unjustly born, unjustly raised and unjustly slain.
Taken down by her greatest evil, misdeeds - by her own mistakes
She will pass the torch when the time is right, and hopefully unlike her predecessor and the protagonist we saw in the future, maybe this time, she can give Jeremy von Neuschwanstein a torch that is given at the right moment, so that he too can move ahead and meet the world. And so that she can too, can be someone beyond the idea of duty and succeed her predecessor who was a woman beyond just her duty to care.
Hopefully this post was an enjoyable read with me presenting the crux this story is built upon from the very first chapter alone. While it feels incomplete for now, I will expand on the foundation in the future. One of the most well executed first chapters I have ever had the pleasure of reading and revisiting after every arc, Shuri von Neuschwanstein survives, and builds who she is as a person. I hope she can find her happiness past all the hardships unlike her predecessor.