r/Magicworldbuiling

Worldbuilding Challenge - Describe your world using only the 1000 most used words in English!
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Worldbuilding Challenge - Describe your world using only the 1000 most used words in English!

Hi there r/goodworldbuilding,

There are a lot of words in the English dictionary, but sometimes, using all of them can be a bit frustrating to read. Let's make this a challenge!

Describe your world using only the 1000 most common words in English!

Rules:

  • For the sake of uniformity, use this checker for words to avoid. It highlights them in red so you know what to break down into simpler terms.
  • Proper nouns, such as the names of things, locations, and characters can be used even if they are outside the 1000, but they need to be defined in terms of the 1000 most common words.
  • You can use numbers, but please keep them as digits.
  • Make your comment as long or as short as you wish, but keep to the 1000 words in your toolbox.
  • You can describe the world as a whole, a location, a character, or a single thing, but try to make it an interesting one.
  • People put a lot of effort into their worlds, and conversation is always appreciated. Please read through others' submissions as well, and if you find something interesting, please reply to it.
  • Replies to submissions need not use just the 1000 most common words, as, by then, such limitation would detract from the conversation.

For future iterations of this challenge, feel free to suggest better word-checkers.

u/_Ceaseless_Watcher_ — 1 day ago
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[OC] my take on vampires

Text and info in the image (Art made by myself)

This is how vampires work in the world of my comic (wip)

ask if you want

u/jonyssaur-Br-7980 — 8 days ago
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Feedback on power system abyssal resonance refined

Hi, this is a power system I made for my world called abyssal resonance ( refined ) would like some feedback

I will try to simplify it as much as possible

Thai power system uses fear as the main source, basically, everyone has a anchor fear that is anchored since you were born, and it awakens during a "Canon event" where the user feels his anchor fear.

Like fear of fire, and then during 99years old, you survive a house fire but your family dies. Canon event:)

There are three types of energies: dread, technique and grace.

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Dread is the normal, naturally leaking from the soul, it is used as the energy for most attacks, like dread infused punches and so on

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Technique is the second energy. It is gained after a Canon event, where the user decides to "interact" with his anchor fear/ embodiment to "lend" some of its power.

But it needs to have a conductor to conduct techniques such as dread or dreadstone( not really important now)

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Grace is a rare and unnatural energy coming from the world tree, it counteracts dread.

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So basically dread = fuel and conductor

Technique = electricity

Grace = insulator

Breaking point

This is basically when the user leaks dread naturally and accidentally but not purposely.

A breaking point can only happen when you interact with your anchor fear.

When a breaking point happens, you usually feel mild effects like normal fear, until you leak too much then the embodiment could show up, using your body as a vessel, but you can still come back.

It can be treated by world tree things like tree leaf herbs and etc.

Abilities

There are many abilities that normal people can use for now. ( Prob adding more)

Fear infused

— dread infused punches, adding techniques will strengthen techniques

Mental projection

— imagine purposely leaking and compressing dread and techniques, and then sending the dread through direct contact. Then the opponent goes into a mental state associated with your technique

(Sending brainwaves to the person's brain)

Abyssal technique

Purposely leaking and adding technique to make a domain barrier associated with your technique. It has two states being wrath and defensive, one stronger and one more longer

So last thing I wanna say is that this is still fear, a negative emotion, so when I make one, I try to base it of the feeling rather than just fire with fireball!

And since it's a negative emotion, the techniques sometimes hurt you too. So it's a competition of control rather than power

Any feedback is needed, thank you

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u/yaphongkhai567 — 8 days ago