Creative Prompts

Exercices d'écriture et amorces de récits pour stimuler l'imagination.

Image 1 — Hot take: I think oceans in fantasy worlds have MUCH more potential than most people think.
Image 2 — Hot take: I think oceans in fantasy worlds have MUCH more potential than most people think.

Hot take: I think oceans in fantasy worlds have MUCH more potential than most people think.

In a lot of fantasy stories most of the ancient and dangerous stuff is found in places like volcanoes, underground, space, etc... while oceans are just that one place that is used to travel and get food, and I think that's a huge waste of potential.

In OUR world, the oceans contain extremely ancient stuff, creatures bigger than any land animal, and deep sea ecosystems that look like alien planets in comparison to what we have on land. In my opinion, fantasy worlds oceans should be the wildest, most dangerous and cryptid places in the setting.

Just imagine the possibilities: Trenches so deep that they reach hell itself, leviathans so colossal that they make even the most legendary dragons look small in comparison, extremely ancient evils that were sealed in the depths eons ago by civilizations that went extinct before the ocean was even there, gods unknown to the world who are sleeping in the seas and are waiting for some fool to awake them, etc...

u/IntrovertedMouseGuy — 5 hours ago

If the afterlife is a widely known fact—and a good, pleasant one free from suffering—then why aren't things like mass suicides, attempts to wipe out all life, mass solitarity (driven by the fear of hurting someone and ending up in hell), and a widespread refusal to reproduce commonplace?

Marked NSFW just to be safe. What are your explanations? Because to me, it’s inexplicable; even in a system where the amount of happiness in the afterlife depends on the balance of good and bad deeds, most people still wouldn't want to have children, and there would still be mass suicides and there's woukd be no true kidness just oppurtunist to go to good side of afterlife .

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u/EveningImportant9111 — 8 hours ago
▲ 160 r/EbonyImagination+1 crossposts

The Aforian Dragonguard - a visual and some lore on them

Hope you like it! Tell me what you think in the comments

u/Dungeon_Dad — 6 hours ago

[WP] You and your three friends have survived the zombie apocalypse for years by treating it like a 4-player co-op survival campaign, complete with designated roles, item sharing, and tactical callouts. Today, while fighting a horde, one of the infected yells, "Friendly fire!"

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u/Fast_Turnover9909 — 5 hours ago

Themed drinks for a Succubus-ran bar?

hello! I am in need for a drink menu for a Succubus-ran bar on a train but I have no ideas 😭 Basically anything love/sex/demon/etc themed would work! something train related would work as well! (NSFW just incase..)

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u/Admiral_Fang — 3 hours ago

[WP] "For the last time, I am NOT practicing necromancy! A process like that necessitates the manipulation of the barrier between life and death, and the mangling of souls, do you have any idea how costly AND unethical that would be?! These are just bone golems! I like the aesthetic."

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u/Xero818 — 6 hours ago

How should I approach international relations on the new map?

As I've been gradually completing my new map, I've run into a major problem. Now that the map has changed, I can't just carry over the old international relations as they were!

Previously, the setup was a conflict between the Empire of Arctica and the Confederacy of the Rodimia continent. The center of the Rodimia continent is Fides, and in the old map, it faced Arctica directly across the sea, which made the conflict very clear-cut. The people of Arctica wanted to move south in search of fertile farmland, while the people of Rodimia wanted to move north for the rare magic stones that could only be found in Arctica.

But in the new map... it seems like the confederated powers centered around Fides would have no reason at all to want to expand into Arctica. They already have fertile farmland that's pleasant to live in, plus there would be plenty of active trade within the Ecumaire Sea—so who cares if they don't have magic stones?

Since I really love the new map, I'm not going to change the terrain. Here's what I'm thinking as possible solutions:

  1. Relocate Fides to a different position.
  2. Shift the center of the story to the Primus Peninsula. This would actually work out well since I'm rewriting the central story anyway.
  3. Scrap the conflict between the two and design a new set of international relations altogether.

Which of these do you think would be the best approach? Or is there another solution besides these three?

u/Brave_Engineering999 — 7 hours ago

Horrors From Beyond the Stars

The world I'm working on features anthropomorphic animals as the characters. It's about the age of industrialization, and how the people adapt. If they're not building neat stuff or fighting among themselves, they're fighting the eldritch spawn of Yaldabaoth (not the actual Gnostic Demiurge, just horrors from beyond the stars).

Introduction

Just trying to draw new stuff. The image depicts one of the aforementioned 'horrors from the stars.' Just to give an idea of the vibe; they can look like many things as their form varies. They're basically abominations.

No one knows what they are, exactly, or where they came from. But their purpose is simple: consume everything and spread.

They spread by creating zombies that will eventually become eldritch horrors, themselves.

Background

They first appeared on the planet millions of years ago, turning dinosaurs and other prehistoric life into zombies, then hid in the earth when the temperature dropped. They emerged later at some point in the distant past but were driven back into the earth by ice age civilizations, and sealed away. This resulted in over 10,000 years free from eldritch horrors.

When they emerged again, it was during the age of industrialization. They didn't make the world's problems disappear... they complicated them. The bad actors of the world seek to control them to use as weapons, while a predator supremacist cult believes they are the ultimate predator sent by Yaldabaoth to cleanse the world.

Powers and Abilities

The horrors have a variety of abilities. At the basic level, they can mutate their flesh to enhance their capabilities or form weapons and armor. Over time, they gain the ability to channel a mysterious power from another realm, for a variety of supernatural effects (such as telekinesis and generating radiation).

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The following map may provide additional insight on the world: Anthropomorphic Animals, Amazing Powers, and the Age of the Machine : r/worldbuilding

u/HyperActiveMaineCoon — 8 hours ago

[WP] Turns out dragons imprint on the first thing they see when they hatch. You find this out the hard way, and you are in so much trouble now.

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u/Bowoodstock — 9 hours ago

[WP] "Are you really suggesting we fly around like superheroes?" "Why not? We're powerful and we'll be sticking around for a while—it could be fun. Besides, their fondness for us will make conquering the planet easier."

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u/Megamen1927 — 4 hours ago

[FN] Rock 'Em Sock 'Em

I take a few quick steps backwards and then dart forward, moving from the Unforgiving Wind into the Iron Eagle while mixing in a little Klartred City alley boxing. The sound of my fists travelling through the air is like tearing rice paper.  Two jabs connect clean and the orc grunts; he’s on the backfoot again, a backfoot that he’s occupied almost the entire fight. Kivtz is bigger than me, stronger than me, and the brutal uk-vai fighting style that means survival in the cannibalistic swamps of his home is every bit as effective as what they teach in the Court of Iron.  But here’s the thing: fights are won in the mind, your opponent’s mind, and Kivtz still hasn’t mentally recovered from a first-round hook that shook his brain like a baby’s rattle. He’s tired, nervous. I move inside his guard, turn away a desperate haymaker with the back of one hand, and my next Fingersmith punch picks him up and throws him across the sandy floor of the Fighter’s arena.

This time he stays down.

My victory was just in time. As I raised my fists to an audience of Fighters, Monks and Barbarians who roared and smacked their paws together, an earthquake rocked the arena. Then another. And another. He was moving again, and I’m not talking about Kivtz. The wild pressure fluctuations that accompanied so much mass being set into motion created all sorts of weather, this time, boulder-sized hailstones that fell like gnomish cannonfire. One exploded right next to me. There was no ceiling to the Giants Back Academy Fighter’s arena: we were completely exposed. Dark cloud vortexes above began to whirl.

I ran to Kivtz. Muscle memory is a funny thing: I’m dragging him up by the collar with one hand, drawing the other hand back for a clean Reaper Strike, before I stop myself*.*  In the Court of Iron we were taught to strike at downed opponents. To guarantee victory. But I lived by my own code these days. Dirk moved to the other side of the orc as we half carried, half dragged him to shelter. THWUMP! Another hailstone near miss made me flinch. Ice shrapnel bit into my skin. We were both panting by the time we had the unconscious Fighter under the cover of the arena gate.

“Princess,” said the Rogue, trying a little too hard to not seem out of breath. “Another victory. I am glad I was thorough enough to organise this little contest: until today I was certain that Kivtz was the school’s best boxer.”

I wrinkled my nose at the “princess”: I never rose higher than eighteenth-in-line to the throne. And I was a common street urchin for years before that. Yes, I am aware how unoriginal this all sounds. But one of the perks of doing the whole half-elf-street-thug-to-royal-heir cliche is you encounter a lot of teenage boys like Dirk. Drawling, darkly handsome master assassins who like to wear black and tend to have a stiletto constantly spinning between their fingers. Get past the mystique and they are always less impressive than they seem.

“Dirk,” I said, raising my nose haughtily, full court accent. “Hosting a bare-knuckle-fighting contest at the end of the world was certainly a choice.  Pray do share, exactly, why I have just beaten five of my fellow students to a pulp.”

Being talked down to – literally, we are both seventeen but I was almost a head taller than Dirk, who was not short by human standards – only seemed to amuse the Rogue. He deposited the winner’s purse into my waiting hand. “Yes, it does feel a bit apocalyptic out there.”  He glanced at the fallen orc and beckoned. I followed him a short distance down the tunnel.  “The world isn’t ending,” he said in a low voice. “But the school might. What if I told you, there was a chance to save it. For you to save it.”

I frowned. It made the black eye and split lip hurt. Everything hurt now that the adrenaline was beginning to fade. “I’d ask how. The Wizards and Druids have been trying to make contact with old Skagol for days. Telepathy, custom speak-with-animal spells, the works. He’s not listening. And if you do plan to kill him, well, even if that were somehow possible, killing the mountain-sized giant which carries our school on his back might not be as wise as waiting to see how this all plays out.”

“And if I told you I knew how it was going to play out? And that it was going to play out very badly.”

I scanned the Rogue’s face. You didn’t survive long on the streets of Klartred if you couldn’t spot a liar. Ditto the Court of Iron.

He was telling the truth.

“How is it going to play out, Dirk?”

 

#

 

Old Skagol had always looked like he was going to start walking again. His entire posture had a forward bent, his shoulders hunched, the crown of his ginormous head bowed forward. His huge arms had been pressed knuckle first against the valley floor, ready to swing into motion with his next step, the deeply creviced columns of his legs bent into an angled squat that would propel him forward. But thousands of years had passed without him so much as blinking; entire ecosystems had taken root in his craggy skin. Empires had risen and fallen, the most recent of which was dismantled by my great-aunt the Iron Queen before her assassination. Amid all that, people had forgotten that the mountain on which the fantasy high school had been built was not actually a mountain but a living, breathing creature with its own thoughts and whims, even if a single breath lasted decades.

I have to admit, I just didn’t think about it all that much. Being a student at Giants Back Academy was hard, especially when someone only needed to see your blue hair to think they knew who and what you are. I didn’t have time to worry about the giant in Giants Back Academy: I was too busy living up to the impossible reputation that has been established by just about every single one of my family members after leaving the Court of Iron. I used to be sad that the way I left things at the court made it impossible that one of my royal cousins could join me at Giants Back Academy. Azaela, before the…incident, wasn’t just family, she was my best friend. Now I’m grateful, even if that isolation kind of makes me lonely. It’s one more point of separation between me and the people everyone compares me against. 

But even if my focus had been on the giant, I could never have predicted this. Because it wasn’t old Skagol moving again, that first disrupted the peace of our lives.

It was the arrival of another giant.

Another giant, that, according to Dirk, old Skagol wanted to fight.

 

#

 

The architects of Giants Back Academy must have thought they were being pretty clever when they built the school’s library at the giant’s crown. The joke was on them now that old Skagol was craning his neck to look up at the massive stranger who filled the northern horizon. The new angle was only a few degrees off horizontal but it had been enough to set off a chain reaction of falling stacks that had torn bookshelves asunder and scattered books everywhere. I followed Dirk across the raised, white metallic walkway that arched gracefully over the main hall like a dove taking flight. Fortunately, both the walkway itself and the nearest rows of stacks that ran parallel to and underneath it had been designed by former resident mad scientist and inventor Gabli before he got bored with the project. Like all of Gabli’s designs, they were beautiful if hilariously overengineered, and nothing short of a comet striking the school could break the complex cantilevered joints that connected the bookshelves to the floor.

“Where’s Mr Tock?” I looked down at the sea of bookshelves, intact nearest to the walkway, leaning drunkenly on top of each other or just smashed to splinters further away.

“The librarian is off lobbying for a school-wide evacuation,” Dirk said. “Books first, of course.”

“Of course,” I repeated. “He hasn’t got much time. We don’t have much time.”

“It’ll take Skagol two days to reach the stranger. That should be more than enough time for you to get familiar with the controls.” He shook the leather satchel which he carried slung over one shoulder. It contained a twinned set of magic gauntlets: one Slave-set and one Master-set.

Dirk must have seen my expression because he added, “You don’t like this plan much, do you?”

“Am I comfortable mind controlling a giant into becoming our personal fighting machine? No, not really.”

“You’d only be ensuring he doesn’t, how did you put it earlier?” He put on his most prim little princess voice. “‘Get beaten to a pulp.’ “

I ignored the barb. “Will he know what’s going on?”

Dirk’s thin smile faded and he looked away. I felt my stomach sink. Slave-set and Master-set.

When he didn’t reply I asked in a quiet voice, “How bad is it going to be for him?”

Dirk breathed out an impatient sigh. “Not as bad as watching our school get smashed to pieces. Look, princess. You can’t always pick a good, clean fight and just go in swinging until someone’s declared a winner. Sometimes you have to stop and think, you have to wait, maybe even get a little sly. There’s usually more than one way to get what you want, but there also might only be one way, a way that some might consider…evil.” He gave me a sideways look. “From what I’ve heard about the latter days of the Court of Iron, you should be no stranger to the concepts like the ‘greater good’ and ‘the ends justify the means’. Some cliches are cliches for a reason.”

We didn’t talk for a while. He was right: seizing control of a giant to protect your home was exactly the kind of thinking that was encouraged in the Court of Iron. A couple of years ago I wouldn’t have questioned such a plan. It’d taken watching a friend have her leg broken almost clean in two to make me start rethinking such ideas.

When he was about halfway across the grand main hall, Dirk stopped and slid his legs over the ornate handrail. Ignoring the nearest ladder which was three aisles back, he dropped lightly to the library floor twenty feet below.

I glanced at the nearest brass sign.

Self-help Guides for Rogues

I hit the ground behind him with a combat roll. “Everything…okay with you?”

Dirk gave me his trademark thin smile. “I figured that if I was going to risk hiding it in plain sight, here was the one place that I could guarantee no one would stumble across it by accident. Rogues don’t do a lot of self-reflection.”

It wasn’t exactly hidden in plain sight. Dirk pulled on a book titled When Deceit becomes Self-Deceit and a tall and wide timber slid out of the bookshelf on a rail, like something you might hang a mirror on. It was a door.

No, not just a door.

The Door.

I gasped. “I thought it was destroyed!”

“Good thing it wasn’t.”

Six months ago the school went completely crazy, or even crazier then usual I suppose, when Shadowstep, the new Roguery teacher, set a group project to open The Door. The prospect of opening a seemingly impenetrable magical portal to some mysterious nether realm was simply too tantalising for your average Giants Back Academy student and something close to a civil war broke out as different factions raced to be the first to open it. Rumour had it that a group of students even succeeded, but they were eaten by hyper-intelligent pigs from another dimension. I don’t know if this story is true, but I do not know that after that night, the teachers cancelled the project and promised to destroy The Door.

 Yet here it was.

 “How?” I asked.

“It’s a long story. Let’s just say that Shadowstep is a chronic liar but he’s also the kind of person who can’t stop talking, and sooner or later he will accidentally spit out a kernel of truth. He likes the sound of his own voice too much.”

“A Rogue who talks too much? Never.”

“Don’t forget the kind of Rogue who barely talks at all. The strong, silent types. Tend to be grieving widowers seeking vengeance. Or the sole survivor of family-wide massacres…who are also seeking vengeance. Anyways. I’ve also got The Keys–“

“The Keys!?

“Yes. Opening The Door is much easier when you actually have The Keys.” He jangled a nondescript keychain at me. “You can even use them to configure where The Door leads to. That’s how I made it open directly into old Skagol’s mind.”

 

#

 

The Door lead us into a big, cavernous dark space where the high ceiling and far walls disappeared into darkness. In that space there was a perfect, miniaturised replica of the giant, about the size of Kivtz.

 “Is that…him?” I asked Dirk.

 To my surprise, Skagol’s avatar turned his big head to answer.

HELLO

I flinched. It wasn’t quite like someone shouting in your ear; it wasn’t that uncomfortable. It just felt like Skagol’s inner voice was too big to fit inside my mind.

“Hi,” I replied awkwardly. I stuck out a hand. “I’m Lysarra.”

HELLO LYSARRA/NOT ALONE/GOOD

The avatar was walking – in time with his real world counterpart to judge by the earthquake vibrations that by now had resumed – but even if his legs were moving the avatar remained fixed to one spot. To my surprise, he took my hand. It felt like how you might expect: like shaking hands with a living statue. 

“I think it’s his subconscious,” Dirk said, answering my earlier question. “If it isn’t, it’s something functionally similar. I do know that, out there, in the real world, big Skagol isn’t shaking hands with air right now. The gauntlets worked when I tested them though, so this avatar must be connected to his motor skills–”

The avatar seemed to see Dirk for the first time. He released my hand and cringed away, throwing up his arms as if to shield himself.

Dirk looked at me guiltily. “I know this looks bad but–” 

“Shut up,” I said. I put my hand on Skagol’s shoulder. He was trembling. “It’s okay, Skagol. He can’t hurt you anymore.”

MIND/DISEASE/AFRAID

I moved closer.

AFRAID/AFRAID/AFRAID

To my own surprise, I hugged him. He just looked so…sad.

The trembling lessened, then stopped. 

BETTER

“We’re not putting the gauntlets on him,” I told Dirk.

 Dirk rubbed the bridge of his nose. “What’s the alternative?”

 "You said this…avatar is connected to his motor skills? It affects how he moves?”

 Dirk nodded.

 I hugged the giant tighter. “I’m going to train him.”

 

#

 

In the absence of a light source that wasn’t Dirk’s campfire, day and night inside that place quickly lost any meaning. But during the two “days” we were there, I spent almost my entire time training Old Skagol.  Basic guards and stances, simple boxing drills. Beginner’s boxing techniques that wouldn’t take years of practice to yield results.  We couldn’t be sure if this training was being relayed to the “real” giant below, but Old Skagol’s avatar was surprisingly receptive to it all, and he genuinely seemed to enjoy it, bouncing HAPPY’s off our minds as he worked the pads we had made by stuffing our leather packs with clothes. And let me tell you, the guy could pack a punch; I’m pretty sure he cracked one of my ribs with a bodyshot, and that was when I was behind two handspans of dirty laundry. I could only imagine what a full-sized Skagol punches would feel like.

 During the “night”, we ate dinner and lay down to sleep in our makeshift campsite. And that’s when things truly turned strange: because it was just as I was drifting off that the giant rolled up my flimsy sense of self and dragged me down into the deep waters of his true mind.

 Days like drops of rain,

Living creatures under your skin.

No time at all since the world roiled and burned.

No time at all, riding the continental drift.

No time at all.

 I can only try to explain what it is like to swim in a giant’s mind. To feel all that mass underneath you, around you, permeating you. Yes, there was the horizon dipping away with the curvature of the planet, the landscape reduced to a vibrant carpet. But underneath those conscious moments were the deep cross currents of all his thoughts and feelings. Memories, both recent and ancient. The random intrusive thoughts: what if I squashed that herd of kobolds? Satisfaction in one high step that carried him to the lip of a deep canyon. A faint sense of melancholy when he saw the moon reflected off the surface of a tiny puddle, a huge lake. Other emotions that even my mind, halfway between elf and human, could not comprehend. And that was just the broad thrust of what he was feeling in that moment, a wave gliding across the surface of a bottomless ocean. How do you put those feelings underneath into words? All the tiny conscious moments that by themselves were as insubstantial as one single snowflake settling on one of the steepest icy peaks at his right shoulder, yet as real as anything we might experience.

 I guess I can only come at it with abstractions, like the poem that I woke with ringing in my mind like wind chimes. Or like that big dark cave with its avatar of a walking giant.

 Dirk was sitting up in his bedroll too, stirring the fire with a piece of wood. “Did you live that too?” He asked in a quiet voice. He had lost his usual laconic air. “I’d never slept inside here before.”

 Did you live that too? I knew what he meant.

 “I saw his mother,” I said. Briefly. Face polished smooth like marble, eyes shining with love, backdropped by a lurid-red sky filling with black smoke. As big as a planet: or was it Skagol who had been so small?

 “I felt the way he feels about the stranger,” Dirk said. “And I mean, I really felt it. This is all one big territorial dispute. Skagol cannot bear having the stranger so near him. And neither can the stranger, I think. But…it’s not exactly like they hate each other. It’s more like a force, gravity, pulling them in.”

 “Do you…do you think we could convince him not to fight?”

 He shook his head. “I tried. Last night in that…dream. And before I enlisted you to help, I would try to talk to the avatar. You can’t reason with how he feels. Words won’t do it. Something….deeper needs to happen, to change his mind.” He was silent for a second. His eyes sharpened into focus as he looked at me. “This isn’t going to end until one of them is dead.”

 “But Skagol seems so gentle.”

 Dirk nodded. “Too gentle. But stubborn too. Listen. It’s not too late to just take the reins.”

 “You would still do that after what we just experienced?”

 “If it would save him, I would. He’s not a child. But he’s not exactly an adult, either.”

 I leaned against the cloak I had rolled into a pillow. Stared into the dark ceiling. “He’s a highschooler…Like us.”

 “Think about it, princess. If you are wrong about this, he will die and the results will be cataclysmic. You think they can evacuate the whole school, our school? There will be students crammed into every nook hoping for front row seats of the fight. The teachers won’t find them all.  People are going to die for your moral stand.”

 “Do you always imagine the worst?”

 “Always.” He was silent for a moment. “I used to know this girl. She was tough, brave…good. She would do anything for a friend, fling herself headfirst off a cliff if she thought I was at the bottom and in danger. She left the school before graduation, did the whole travelling adventurer routine, always willing to help a stranger in need. One day a shepherd begs her to help with his wolf problem. Claims his family is starving from all the animals he was losing. That no one else would help him.” He flung the piece of wood he had been holding into the campfire. “Turns out the shepherd had been withholding certain, crucial details. It wasn’t wolves she had to contend with. It was werewolves. If he had just told her, she could have brought back up. Could have brought me…” 

 Skagol hadn’t walked in hours and the cave walls were silent. I think he slept during those moments of quiet, I’m not sure. Only the smouldering, dying fire filled the silence.

 “You were right about the Court of Iron,” I said. The non-sequitur didn’t seem to register on Dirk so I continued, “Using the gauntlets would be very in keeping with the Iron Truth. That is, the Court of Iron principle that nothing of values come without sacrifice. That “sacrifice” might be a limb that you need to severe to escape a trap, or the lives of the soldiers you command, or maybe just your own moral code. If something is truly worth doing, then you must be willing to give up something valuable in exchange. Anything else is moral cowardice.”

 I try not to think about it. But it’s not easy, sometimes it just came bubbling back up. The incident. Azaela.

 “Then one day, another girl and I were in a competition,” I said, my voice suddenly thick. “They have these things in the Court of Iron, titles, knighthoods…Basically it’s their way of pitting us against each other. We were both in the running to be a knight, my friend and I. We just happened to be sparring the day before it was going to be announced. In front of the court. So I went a bit further than I would have usually. In the fight.” My breath caught in my throat. I tried to still it. Felt a sob climbing my throat, bit it down.  “And she got hurt.”   

 Would she still be able to walk after what happened? The friend I was willing to sacrifice for some meaningless title? I wasn’t sure. I didn’t stick around long enough to find out.

 “I didn’t need to hurt her,” I continued. It was easier to talk again. I wiped away a tear. “I learned afterwards that they were always going to give me the knighthood. It had been decided days ago. I hurt Azaela for nothing. That was my last day in the Court. I left. Came here.” I turned in the bedroll so I could look Dirk square in the eye. “I’m sorry for what happened to your friend. And I’ll always regret what I did to mine. But life doesn’t always punish you for doing the right thing. And it doesn’t reward you for doing the wrong thing. The universe doesn’t operate under that kind of hidden logic. It’s too random. You need to look at what’s real now. What real harm we will do to Skagol, and all the good that your friend actually achieved before what happened, happened.”

 “It wasn’t enough good,” he replied quietly. “Not nearly enough.”

 He looked younger by firelight. More like a boy. “You know, there’s a chance that old Skagol might not appreciate us hijacking his mind. That there might be other long-term effects from mind controlling a giant that we have not anticipated. I could list all the ways using the gauntlets could go wrong, and we could stack them up against the problems with my plan and pick a winner. But being a good person…It’s not a mathematical equation. Sometimes it’s like how you described your friend, flinging yourself headfirst off a cliff to help those in need. Doing the right thing... It’s a leap of faith.”

 

#

 

When the training was done and there was no more time to realistically prepare Skagol any further, we joined the rest of the school as it evacuated to the safe distance of some nearby wooded hilltops where we could watch the fight by the blood red dying light of sunset. By then, Dirk had shared his insights into what was happening with the teachers and the worst of the end day cults that had swept through the school while we were in the cave had been suppressed by the school’s faculty. Order had been restored. I was grateful when Dirk didn’t tell the teachers about my refusal to seize control of Skagol’s brain. I suppose we were committed to my strategy by then, however dangerous it was starting to seem.

 Though the other giant was at least a head taller than old Skagol, it was younger. You could tell because it had a rougher, less worn body. In fact, it looked more like some sort of giant crustacean on legs with the black mountain-sized flanges and the twisting carapace ridges. One, horizontally elongated eye stared from a jagged, dark opening in the shell. It had arrived on our horizon on all four legs: now it waited for Old Skagol on just two. I think the stance was intended to show off his size. Apparently even among giants it meant something when the other guy was bigger.

 “Are you sure about this?” Dirk asked quietly, shaking his head at a passing gnome vendor who had brandished a sausage on a stick at him. Even with the entire school at stake there was a festival vibe to the gathered students and teachers. Bonfires and food stalls. Someone was playing a fiddle.

 “No,” I admitted.

 “I don’t want to lose our home.”

 The strength of feeling in his voice surprised me. But before I could come up with a reply, someone shouted and I turned a just in time to see Old Skagol's fist flying out, a meteorite coming down on a mountain...

 PART 2 COMING SOON

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u/Ghengiz — 4 hours ago

[WP] You love admiring your face in the mirror. Like every other day, you’re doing just that when a voice asks, “You like it that much?” Startled, you look around. You happen to glance at the mirror, and in the reflection, you’re smiling strangely.

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u/AzrynnAshborn — 7 hours ago

Bible/Old Testament from world building perspective

How do you, as a world-builder, view the Bible from a world-building perspective? Looking at its story, mythology, characters, and so on.

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u/Sorcerer_50 — 9 hours ago

Help me fill out the lore - What can you deduce from this fantasy map, and from looking at it, what would you like to know about this world?

Ask me anything about the map, the world, the geopolitics and history surrounding it! Hopefully I can answer most questions with a substantial answer, and those that I can't expose the gaps that I need to fill.

For context, I drew the original map years ago when I was a kid, and only now have I come back to it and digitised it. I have spent a while crafting the lore surrounding the world, but have kept the map intentionally minimalist. Ideally it would be a parchment style map, but the various kingdoms have been highlighted here for your benefit.

The less detailed areas on the edges of the map are designed that way to show a lack of exploration and knowledge by the civil interior regions, so are intentionally left minimalist. The north and west are mostly wild and untamed, offering immense danger to any would be settlers for little reward, and as such are known as the wild lands. The empty south is dominated by great stretching deserts and large isolationist southern kingdoms that act essentially as a barrier to the south for the main stories area

u/Tricky_Highlight_983 — 13 hours ago

The World I've Built In Hell

Hey folks! I'm a 37 year old Scotsman and I've been writing a Dark Fantasy/Hyper-Violence comic set in Hell since 2021.

Hell's main resource is blood. It's their source of power (they can even heal injuries as far as lost limbs, which is utilised through the use of a personal "Insignia") and keeps the Earth's core from exploding by forming a barrier around it. If the human world is tampered with, eventually Hell will see a blood famine which will result in the blood barrier dropping, which will cause the core to explode and end in the total extinction of all life on Earth.

The plot is: the 9 Circles of Hell exist, and within each of the circles, they have their own societies led by a hierarchy, and each one has a set of 9 laws in accordance with the circle's sin (Lust, Gluttony, Greed, etc.). A civil war has broken out after one of the Lord's faithful turned against him, and then killed him, to usurp his throne. This has thrown everything in Hell into chaos and put the human world in danger.

More than willing to answer any questions and feedback is much welcomed.

Thank you!

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u/DawaraweldTCOS — 9 hours ago

[WP] For years you have been using your god-gifted divine powers to perform miraculous feats in their name. Only to discover now that the powers have never had anything to do with your god.

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u/SilverLining42 — 7 hours ago

Different possible purposes of farm animals?

Wanting to make my own farm animals for my fantasy world that have either the same or similar purposes to our world’s farm animals
I know there is meat for food and skin/fur for clothes, but any more ideas?

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u/Sage_Notes — 9 hours ago

[WP] The villain’s most personal inner sanctum was protected and built with magic. You expected an armed fortress, or a trap of some kind, but when you enter, you find yourself standing with him at a beach.

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u/Smartbutt420 — 6 hours ago

[WP] Bells are not simply sound but rather precision tuned instruments meant to keep your species nervous system in tact. The village bell has been sabotaged and slowly slips into madness.

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u/GrundalWizzard — 6 hours ago

[WP] A Siren aimed to sink the boat of a fisherman. So when they began its charm, singing the melody it has used a thousand times, it did not expect the fisherman to sing along.

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u/Various-Bath-2126 — 14 hours ago