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There are two lasting bequests we can give our children: one is roots, the other is wings. Enjoy Bach Fugue n 1 in C Major BWV 870 WTC2

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u/carmelopaolucci — 3 days ago
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[FEEDBACK] ULTRALORD - Black Pool - Hip Hop Instrumental

but a moment of your time, my friends. I’d just like some brutally honest feedback on my mix. In my opinion, it’s ready to go, so I’m hoping for criticism from any and all comers. I don’t care if you started composing a week ago. ANY feedback. Your passing thoughts could change the course of my life. Thank you for anyone who took any of their time and used it to listen to my work. All the more thanks for those that took more time to help me.

u/ULTRALORD813 — 6 days ago
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Another Life (Intro) Demo

hey guys,

first unfinished demo ever.. but the feeling is there. it’s my intro song so it’s only 1:30m long. vocals are rusty, just started practicing again after long hiatus.

let me know what stands out (good or bad).

thanks 🙏🏽

on.soundcloud.com
u/Difficult_Pain7161 — 9 days ago
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Back to my roots, (The Lock, a tribute to Wax Taylor and The Wiseguys)

My 20 years of Dj'n brought me on the shores of house musci and even techno, always kept an urban flavor in my selection but went afar from my musical and cultural roots.

Recently I began a new journey into professional mixing and mastering for other artist friends (I'm a total beginner) I felt i needed some kind of empty canvas to experiment stuff and didn't feel doing it on other people's projects...

So here's,my first 'track', an homage to my musical roots. When had to 'categorize' it (I hate the musical division into genres) it just felt right to put it under trip hop.

What do,you think?

All feedbacks appreciated, even informed criticism, I'm here to learn!

Thanks!

Alessandro

The Lock, a tribute to Wax Taylor and the Wiseguys

Wax Taylor, The Wiseguys, Alessandro Bavasso Mellini on #SoundCloud

https://soundcloud.com/bavassomellini/the-lock

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u/FickleAd7118 — 10 days ago
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It’s Just an introduction! - What are your thoughts?

Hi, I made this raw track recorded on my phone.

I’d love feedback on:
the vibe,
vocal flow and delivery,
whether the lyrics feel authentic or too abstract
if the ending verse hits
Please listen till the end — the final section changes a bit stylistically 🙂

Lyrics :-

It's the opening act yaha yaar mere kirdar mere kahani bhi meri par manamani duniya ki chale
It's the opening act yaha awaz meri time mera nikalunga gaane 4 ye to bass shuruwat hai zamane ki
It's the opening act
Aankhe meri video banati chale
Aage sapne dhikati chale
Sapna dhundla gey to kohre mein kaam se side line hotechale . Phir samay pe pabhandi aayi priorties ki listing layi
Jira board bhargya bhai?
Thoda samay leke samay ko balwan banado.
I got that nostalgia time machine par na jau wapasi to save that time
How can i save that time
I got dime for my time
I got mind for my time

And i also got to know that

Aslasya samsaya hai
Galti hogya to kya hai
Aage badhlo picha kya hai
Piche to bass bhoot kal
Abhi chalraha vartman
Abb tu mann na mann par kirdar mere
par janne hai sabi yaha
Mixed emotions ki sabha
Abb araha hai mazza
Bandha hai ye sama
Bandha hai ye sama

Suno bangalore ki ye lore
Roaming around delhi airport
Chod me nikale do bhai the on top
Flight land
Samay jhand

Yerdu milds kodi

Felt vulnirable
Samajh me ne aay
Puri raat bhandi me jay
Whaat the fuck is happening ye kaha aagay mere bhai

Felt vulnerable totally understandble

Music ae loud
Cloudy hai crowd
I am gonna take the shot
I feel like i am shroud

Woke up and i must
Saaf karaha gaano se ab dust
Lagg gai jo mere gaano par ab rust
I am gonna drop the act and make it a bust
Phir karna just adjust i am gonna combust and thrust . Well arent these lyrics just robust . What should i do

Its just an introduction to this new version
Starting the 0.0.1 i am now stubborn

u/Frequent-Loan7252 — 14 days ago