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[Feedback] First ambient track: looking for advice

​I’ve just finished my very first ambient track, using electric guitar, bass, field recordings, waveform manipulation and a old Korg Ax3g.

I am looking for honest feedback on the composition and sound design. I want to know exactly what works, what feels disjointed, and where the mix fails.

I’m here to improve, so please be as critical as necessary.

Thank you

u/Only-Arugula1449 — 9 hours ago
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Looking to develop as a songwriter; is there anything here worth keeping or any directions worth pursuing?

These are all demos and compromise a few different paths I could follow as far as songwriting is concerned. Do any of these here show promise? If so, which ones?

I appreciate your time. Thank you for checking this out...

samply.app
u/RCP90sKid- — 9 days ago
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Vasel Karnel - pa's revolting smile (Official Music Video)

This song is a unique experimental rock piece characterized by its ghostly vocals and raw textures.

It feels less like a typical dream pop song and more like a beautifully tragic nightmare, delivering a deep sense of unease and melancholy.

youtu.be
u/Real_Detective_4219 — 8 days ago
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Is my intro too strange??

Hi, I've recently started creating songs and I'm still discovering new techniques, any feedback on things I should improve? For this track, I took inspiration from radiohead's "Nude". Let me know your thoughts and if it has potential, please.

Here's the link for the instrumental: https://on.soundcloud.com/lJRhyR6HqtlPeLStJR

u/King_Potatoo — 10 days ago
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Made my first song, would love some honest feedback

Hey everyone,

Just dropped a song I made called "We'll Never Be Friends."

I've been making music for a while but this is one of the first tracks I've actually put out. I'd really appreciate some honest feedback.

What worked? What didn't? Would you skip it or save it?

Link:
https://youtu.be/Ysryk_Z-SYY

Thanks for taking a listen.

youtu.be
u/Limp_Lab_6538 — 12 days ago