



First effort- The Dead City (feedback appreciated)
Hey y’all- like the post says, this is my first effort to make something like this, and I would very much appreciate feedback on it. I made it with Twine and categorized it as a visual novel, but I’m not totally sure that’s the best way to describe it.
It’s a new adaptation of a dark Symbolist novel called Bruges-la-morte and is sort of a collage of the novel text, some original text material, photographs and video fragments of my own, and some public domain audio and video.
You can try it here, and comment and/or support it if you wish:
https://jesserichardsart.itch.io/the-dead-city-twine
Thanks!!!
u/Funeral_Wells — 3 days ago