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Hi there! I'm a new script writer and I'm currently writing my first script featuring a vampire.

While I do almost have the first part done, I wish to turn this into a series and hope to incorporate some things you guys like.

Or I might use them for a different vampire series/one shot.

So I was wondering: what are you guys favourite or even least favourite things in those kinds of scripts?

What do you love and what do you hate?

This goes out to both listeners and VAs!

I'm currently wanting to write a script since i'm still sick and can't record anything. I have a few script ideas but can't pick which i want to do and if anyone is interested in these ideas.

List of ideas:

• Plant spirit x rain spirit (angst?)
• Ghost writer/artist x producer/Auctioneer (light hearted?)
• Book fairy x wizard (fuuny?)
• Dry Cleaner x ceo (Yandere?) (clothes stealing?)
• Doppelgänger x the person the look like (yumeship?)(selfsest?)

I think thats all i got rn lol but id most likely think of more tomorrow

A fantastic script by u/joylandblah, leaning into the recent success of comfort scripts! I hope everyone enjoys my rendition 😁!

SCRIPT HERE-approximately 1200 words

My first 2 pride scripts this year were focused on the gender portion of the community, so I knew I wanted to write a script that focused more on the sexuality side of queerness. And while looking through my ideas, I found one that I thought would be super fun to do.

Fun zoology fact! For the longest time, experts believed that only male sheep (rams) exhibited homosexual behavior because female sheep (ewes) were never seen mating with one another. But then someone realized that when an ewe wants to mate, she will completely freeze up and stand as still as possible. So if two ewes want to mate with each other, they'll both just freeze up and nothing will happen. Truly the doomed yuri of our generation. :(

Anyways, that funny bit of animal behavior inspired an ewe character who is the textbook definition of a useless lesbian: Someone who completely freezes up around pretty girls and can't form a complete sentence when talking to them. To contrast this, I decided to make the listener a much more confident, flirty character. And the wolf/alternative thing just kinda came naturally from that. Plus, alternative wolf girls seem  very popular on the internet. I know what you all did to Luna.

Anyways, this is unfortunately my last pride script for June 2026. I know I usually do 4, but this is the first pride month I'm writing fanfiction in. And I forgot to account for that when scheduling. But next year I'll do my best to be more cognizant of the passage of time so I can fill June with even more gayness than ever before! Thank you for reading and happy pride month!

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Summary: You’ve always been a bit on the quirky side. Anyone can see that. But you still have a good life with a good boyfriend. But what happens when you overhear him something not so good?

Red Hood x Nurse | "The Outlaw’s Gift." | Protective Jason | M4A ASMR

Summary: A threatening note changes everything. Jason refuses to let Charlie face the danger alone, forcing him to confront the very fear that's kept him from getting close to anyone. With emotions running high and enemies closing in, one phone call sets the next chapter in motion.

Part 2, structured around Jason losing control emotionally, then forcing himself back into mission mode. The key is that this isn't just "protective boyfriend Jason." This is Jason Todd's worst fear becoming real.

He finally let someone in.

And within minutes, Gotham reminded him why he doesn't.

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Episode 5 Part 2

"The Outlaw’s Gift"

Runtime:

15–18 Minutes

Emotional Arc:

Act 1 Concern → Anger

Act 2 Anger → Fear

Act 3 Fear → Protective Possessiveness

Act 4 Mission Mode

Cliffhanger Safehouse Arrival

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OPENING

Part 1 ended with:

> "Show me the note."

Give the audience a few seconds of silence.

Let Jason read it.

The silence should be worse than yelling.

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Scene 1 — Reading the Note.

(He tries to keep his voice low and controlled but the threat to their safety has him blood boiling beneath the surface but he's trying not to scare her.)

Jason: "Nurse, give me the note."

"Please.."

(Paper unfolds the paper and reads it outloud.)

"..You have been doing a lot of late-night sewing, Nurse.The problem with stitching up a dead man is that eventually, you run out of thread..."

(He says it like every word leaves a bad taste in his mouth. Long pause.)

"No signature.."

"...Cute."

(Pause.)

"No. Not cute."

"Dumb choice of words."

(Paper crumpling.)

"Whoever wrote this is a dead man."

(Pause.)

"Two days?"

(Pause.)

"Two days."

"You got this two days ago."

"And you didn't call me."

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(This is where the first argument starts. Not screaming.Worse. Disappointed Jason.)

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Jason:

"I gave you that burner phone for a reason."

"Remember that conversation?"

"The one where I told you if something felt off..."

"If somebody followed you."

"If somebody made you uncomfortable."

"If somebody so much as breathed wrong in your direction..."

"You call."

"You don't think."

"You don't debate."

"You don't decide you're being dramatic."

"You call."

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(Pause.)

"No."

"Don't."

"Don't do that thing."

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(Pause.)

"That thing where you immediately start minimizing it."

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(Pause.)

"'I didn't want to bother you.'"

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(Sharp exhale.)

"Nurse."

"You are literally the reason I carry that phone."

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(Scene 2 — Jason Spiraling. Now Jason starts pacing. His anger isn't really directed at her. It's fear.)

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Jason:

"Do you have any idea how many people would love to get leverage on me?"

"How many psychopaths would jump at the chance?"

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(Pause.)

"You think this is random?"

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(Pause.)

"You think some creep just picked your apartment?"

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(Laughs once.)

"No."

"No, sweetheart."

"People don't leave notes like this by accident."

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(Pause.)

"They leave notes because they know."

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(Long pause.)

"And if they know..."

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(Voice getting quieter.)

"They've been watching."

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(Pause.)

"Watching you."

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(Pause.)

"Watching us."

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(That should hit hard. Because this is the moment Jason realizes somebody has been observing her.)

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(Scene 3 — Protective Jason. Jason moves closer.)

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Jason:

"Look at me."

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(Pause.)

"No."

"Eyes on me."

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(Pause.)

"Good."

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(Softer.)

"Did anybody follow you?"

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(Pause.)

"Anybody strange at the hospital?"

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(Pause.)

"Anybody hanging around your apartment?"

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(Pause.)

"Anybody asking questions?"

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(Pause.)

"Anything."

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(Pause.)

"Nurse."

"I need you to think."

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(Then the realization.)

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Jason:

"God."

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(Pause.)

"You're scared."

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(Softer.)

"You've been scared for two days."

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(Pause.)

"And you've been dealing with it alone."

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(Quiet anger.)

"Not anymore."

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(Scene 4 — Decision Made. Jason reaches a conclusion. No debate.)

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Jason:

"Okay."

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(Pause.)

"Grab a bag."

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(Pause.)

"No."

"That wasn't a suggestion."

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(Pause.)

"You're not staying here tonight."

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(Pause.)

"Or tomorrow."

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(Pause.)

"Or until I know who's behind this."

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(Pause.)

"Pack."

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(Pause.)

"Clothes."

"Medication."

"Phone charger."

"Anything important."

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(Pause.)

"The rest can be replaced."

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Scene 5 — Dick Grayson Call. This is a major scene. Jason hates asking for help. But when it comes to her he's swallowing his pride to keep her safe.)

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(Phone dialing.)

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Jason:

"Pick up."

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(Pause.)

"Come on."

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(Pause.)

"Dick."

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(Pause.)

"Finally."

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(Pause.)

"Don't start."

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(Pause.)

"No."

"I'm not calling to borrow money."

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(Pause.)

"Shut up."

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(Pause.)

"I need help."

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(Silence. Because Dick immediately knows something is wrong.)

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Jason:

"Yeah."

"That's why I'm calling."

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(Pause.)

"Someone found her."

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(Pause.)

"No."

"Not physically."

"Yet."

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(Pause.)

"A note."

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(Pause.)

"I know."

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(Pause.)

"Trust me."

"I know."

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(Long pause.)

"Because I'm not objective."

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(Pause.)

"No."

"I'm serious."

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(Pause.)

"If this was anybody else I'd be halfway through a warehouse interrogation already."

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(Pause.)

"But it's her."

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(Pause.)

"And I need somebody with a functioning frontal lobe."

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(Dick says something to lighten the mood.)

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Jason:

"Yeah."

"I hate you too."

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(Pause.)

"Can you run it?"

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(Pause.)

"Good."

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(Pause.)

"Meet me at Safehouse Three."

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(Pause.)

"And Dick?"

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(Pause.)

"If somebody put her name on a list..."

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(Voice hardens.)

"I want the list."

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(Call ends.)

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(Scene 6 — The Fear. Jason watches her packing.The fear and vulnerability finally comes out.)

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Jason:

"You know what's funny?"

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(Pause.)

"I spent years convincing myself I worked better alone."

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(Pause.)

"Nobody close."

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(Pause.)

"No attachments."

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(Pause.)

"Nobody to lose."

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(Pause.)

"Then you happened."

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(Small laugh.)

"Stubborn nurse."

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(Pause.)

"Couldn't leave well enough alone."

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(Pause.)

"Kept stitching me together."

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(Pause.)

"And somehow..."

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(Pause.)

"I stopped leaving."

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(Scene 7 — The Confession. This is the emotional climax.)

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Jason:

"Do you understand what scares me?"

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(Pause.)

"It isn't dying."

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(Pause.)

"Been there."

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(Pause.)

"Got the t-shirt."

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(Pause.)

"What's terrifying..."

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(Voice breaking slightly.)

"...is watching somebody I care about become a target because of me."

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(Pause.)

"That's why I keep people away."

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(Pause.)

"That's why Bruce keeps people away."

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(Pause.)

"That's why all of us do."

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(Pause.)

"Because eventually somebody figures out where to aim."

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(Pause.)

"And now..."

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(Long silence.)

"...they know about you."

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(Final Scene. Bag packed. Ready to leave. Jason takes her hand.)

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Jason:

"Listen to me."

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(Pause.)

"I need you to trust me."

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(Pause.)

"I know I can be a lot."

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(Pause.)

"Okay."

"A massive pain in the ass."

---

(Pause.)

"But right now..."

---

(Pause.)

"...I'm asking you to let me protect you."

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(Pause.)

"Just this once."

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(Pause.)

"Because if somebody thinks they can touch what's mine..."

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(Pause.)

"...they're about to learn why Gotham is afraid of me."

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(Long pause.)

"Come on."

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(Sound of helmet being picked up.)

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Jason:

"We've got a safehouse to get to."

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(Door opens.)

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(Quietly.)

"And Nurse?"

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(Pause.)

"Next time somebody threatens you..."

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(Small sigh.)

"...tell me."

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(Softer.)

"Please."

---

(Door closes.)

END OF EPISODE 5 — PART 2

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I don't if this is the right flair to use. but i had this weird idea that's a yandere script. i came up with this because i watch like sooooo much yandere asmrs.

So heres my idea:

• Listener: Your typical yandere for the speaker
• Speaker: A repeat victim of yanderes that they now have a BINGO card for the signs that they are gonna get kidnapped yet again.
• Example: Listener taking photos from a distance in the park. Speaker laying on a picnic blanket "journaling" but they have the BINGO card pulled up. Speaker says something along the lines of like: Hmm i see "taking pictures from afar." thats a check. I need one more and i'll have a bingo.
• I don't need credit or anything but i would love to see the script if anyone writes it.
• Just have fun with it!!!
• NO USE OF AI!!!!

His obsession...has become my obsession..~

【 Credits 】
❥ Script by Meadowbound
❥ SFX are licensed sounds from Epidemic Sound, and my own audio library.
❥ Some Illustrations are from Pinterest, if you are the artist, please email u/oediopuscomplex, so I can credit/replace the thumbnail.

【 Support the Writer! 】
❥ Reddit : u/Meadowbound-347
❥ Script : Link Here!

Listener Summary: After you were forced to leave behind your best friend, you’ve been coming back to visit with them off and on for months now, noticing how the light once in their eyes has gone a little dimmer, and the joy once in their voice has grown solemn. It saddens you to see them this way, so lost and defeated. Each time you leave their side again you tell yourself you'll go back just once more, until the day they’ll no longer need a phantasm of you.

This honestly amazing script was written by the wonderful u/reallyriahscripts and you can find the original post Here. I can only hope I've done their hard work justice.

Final warning, this script does deal with some dark topics and may be hard for some to listen to, If you have any doubts whatsoever, please don't listen.

Audio Here

Hello, I recently finished university and am applying internships for September but in the meantime I am looking for editing work. I charge 20 uk pounds per project and am relatively fast on returns (a few days depending on sfx and scale). If anyone is interested please dm me on discord purrcifer_ and I can send my own channel where I have been editing since 2020.