First Story Feedback
I recently a short story for my Book Club, and I'd really appreciate some feedback. It would mean a lot to me since I'm still a beginner, and plan on writing more stories. Thanks in advance.
TW: Violence, Mental Health, Suicide.
Story: https://www.scribd.com/document/794482689/Eyes-Never-Lie
u/AdventureStorm — 1 day ago