u/Alarmed_Big_562

Providence Divined: I. The Unkindness

The first hallow day,

the last he would be —

the cold son shines in the Fall.

Drowning — lungs fill with tears.

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Our watershed.

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Father and Mother —

chests twisted and sallow.

Agenesis — the birth of death.

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Mother’s gift — a grand plush teddy, adorned:

fur, as soft as his skin, its ebony nose —

and a ribbon.

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The second hallow day,

the last he would be —

the cold son shines in the Spring.

Father walks — taking breath.

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Quietly perching above the ward, a murder gathers.

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At once — a screaming cloud, wings clapping.

Echoes between buildings.

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Run — fast.

Threshold crossed —

to her bedside, gasping.

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empty hands.

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u/Alarmed_Big_562 — 14 days ago

Blink

Boundless heavens — embers to ashes, creation and destruction in perpetuity.

We, born of the stars, ride the light between darkness.

Spontaneous collisions of form seem reverentially designed —

yet not guided by fate, nor shaped by ambition —

but instead by chance:

those improbable revelations crossing.

The order of things, seemingly

orchestrated —

becomes a design stitched from dread:

the fear beyond being.

What were we? Here, then gone —

a flicker, a blink inside forever.

No heaven or anguish await reckoning.

No intent. No good or evil —

only contradiction in the absence of reason.

Moments born, shattered, then born again —

each one a brief spark folded back into time.

We arrive.

We breathe.

We love, we lose —

then — a blink.

And still, we must name it —

to name us, to name significance —

before the unbounded fade — before we blink.

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u/Alarmed_Big_562 — 14 days ago

Beautiful Ebony Angel —

Light Bearer, Prophet,

Creator and Destroyer.

Messenger and love-lost Trickster.

How you haunt me.

Above me once, the storm gathered —

wings like blades in black wind —

screaming, spinning, the sky alive with grief —

foretelling shadow.

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A Mother.

A Father.

Infinite longing, anguish, fear and anger —

Torment born from sons lost, poured into the living daughter.

She is what we could not bury —

a wondrous incarnation shaped by sorrow,

a paradox of hope and ache.

A miracle — and a burden.

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Raven, let me go…

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Beautiful Ebony Angel —

with your shared spirit.

A fleeting touch, a gesture,

a soothing warmth —

mistaken perhaps, for promise.

This yearning born of absence clings to threads of memory —

of children briefly held,

of love never to be.

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Who dares inflict such cruel irony —

to be tethered through your improbable signal —

this divine echo —

only to exorcise what fate itself seemed to offer?

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Raven, let me go…

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Beautiful Ebony Angel —

a torn heart longs to heal.

To cut the thread that binds loss to the living:

unraveled mind,

fractured connection,

hollowed will —

the unwanted ending.

No peace, no clarity — no self.

Find them.

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No longing can make real what never came to be.

And yet your presence lingers —

a comfort, a weight, a hope,

as with yours —

these souls, not mine to hold.

Only your release,

Beautiful Shadow,

can free the Miracle,

the Mother, the Father —

and Thee.

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Let go the Raven.

u/Alarmed_Big_562 — 17 days ago

A man, bent beneath sorrow’s mantle,

wanders a forest path,

cradling the fragile glow of hope.
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His desire for solace ever present, the path reveals moments where ache softens, and the world feels kind.
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One such moment … a birdsong drifts down a spiral of light —

breaking shadows woven through treetops —

descending upon a whispering, luminous thread.
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A wanting gaze upward beholds a sparkling bird in song.

Souls resurrected by melody —

bound by fate.
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A hymn, as solitary comfort.

Calming, peaceful, warm —

stirring belief, that finally he was found —

he had found … home.
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The song unsealed reverence not yet understood —

out of time, out of place.
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So essential, it summoned forth the offering:

a hand outstretched — a sacred invitation, of refuge, of surrender —

in exchange for her song’s quiet healing.
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The bird descends —

a determined flit toward, then away —

back up to its closed rest among the trees —

sparkle folded into shadow, its gift hovering just beyond reach, an eternal melody illumined in mind and soul.
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Again he gestures, the hopeful hand extended.

Each attempt unanswered —

the bird untethered —

solace retreating.
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He wonders: why will it not land?

Perhaps it awaits the right hand —

yet all the while, it was his left he offered.

A hand impossibly bound in the life of his making.

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The sparkle — a mirage.

Her shimmering plume conceals a dispirited refrain.

Twinned darkness, a spiral — open, hidden — swallowing their light.
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And still, her song drifts —
unsettled, he remains in the silence, eternally waiting…

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u/Alarmed_Big_562 — 19 days ago