u/Alive_Donkey_270

I tried to put all the necessary tags and trigger warnings so hopefully this will not be removed. I am looking for feedback on a trans OC I wrote. Her first appearance is chapter five (my five key is broken), and she has major roles in 7, 9 , 13, 29 and 34 (trigger warning 34, transphobia). https://archiveofourown.org/works/88629021/chapters/235151976

If you have any questions I'm happy to answer, I spent weeks making her character sheet and she's the only recurring human in my fic, so she's the human perspective among nations and she's the only one with a plotline, so I want to make sure I'm handling her with respect.

I'm probably ancient among you, please grant me grace.

My fic

I am not trans, and I feel like my trans friend is lying to me about if I did this respectully or not. Edith shows up in chapters Five (my five key is broken), 7, 8, 13, special rule chapter 22, and 29 so far. Chapter Five I definitely know America is out of line and he's supposed to be, but I want to make sure America's golden retriever engery is the joke and not Edith.