Feedback on Two Adventures for SWADE
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Hey everyone!
I’ve been writing a couple of adventures for SWADE, and I’d really love to get some feedback from people who play or are familiar with the system.
I should also mention that the two adventures are connected in a timeline—the outcome of the first directly becomes the background and setup for the second. I also intend to expand this into a longer arc, with five additional adventures that bridge the gap and connect the final story back to the first one, forming a larger continuous narrative.
I’m mainly looking for feedback on two things:
Are they actually good adventures?
Do they sound fun to play?
I’d especially appreciate feedback on the story, encounters, pacing, player choices, atmosphere, and overall fun factor. I’m also interested in knowing if anything feels boring, confusing, overly complicated, or like it wouldn’t work well at the table.
I’m happy to share both adventures here. I’m not necessarily looking for detailed proofreading—I’d much rather know whether, as a player or GM, you’d actually want to play/run them.
Be as honest and critical as you want. I’d rather find the weak points now than discover them after putting them in front of a group!
Thanks in advance!
1st adventure: https://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/YaFhc5aYSrwC
2nd adventure: https://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/xduoAdNAPz\_P