[Iron And Pride: New Sins] Chapter 5 "Igniz"
After traveling for several hours, Ul and Enzel entered a sinister-looking rocky zone. Withered trees, covered in scabs of scorched stone, stretched toward the blackened sky like charred fingers. And yet, among that dead landscape, surprisingly green and healthy vegetation sprouted, vibrant in a contrast that felt almost unnatural.
—“Huh… I didn’t know plants could grow in a place this… dead,” Enzel said.
Ul gave him a tense look.
—“Yeah… That’s not a good sign.”
—“What? Why?”
—“Abnormally healthy vegetation in a dead landscape… It’s a sign of Scorched territory.”
—“Scorched?”
—“Demons whose bodies seem to burn in eternal combustion. They’re incredibly resilient and agile. Even for us, fighting them isn’t simple.”
Enzel puffed out his chest.
—“I see… then I just need to stay alert and give them a good beating if they get close.”
—“Eh… They move in groups of three. No matter how… capable of ‘absorbing hits’ you are, fighting several at once is a guaranteed recipe for defeat. Rather, you’d need to tell me if you see one… so we can decide whether to fight or run.”
—“What? You think I can’t take them?!”
—“That is exactly what I’m saying, yes.”
Enzel huffed indignantly as they continued forward.
Suddenly, the sharp whistle of something cut through the air, and a projectile struck the vehicle’s frame with a dry clank.
—“AHH! What the hell was that?!” Enzel exclaimed.
Ul picked up what looked like an arrow and examined it calmly.
—“Look, more trouble. Seems like a Lancenumjinji is trying to hunt us.”
—“A what?”
Ul raised an eyebrow.
—“Do you seriously know nothing about demons? Were you crawling through Hell surviving without seeing anything?”
—“Ehh… no! I fought with ferocity and rage! I had no time to examine the carcases”
Ul held back a laugh.
—“Sure. Lancenumjinji are serpentine, skeletal demons capable of launching the spines on their backs like arrows. Their venom is potent: it paralyzes and incapacitates. They’re excellent hunters… although…” Ul turned the spine in her hand. “Well, most of the time.”
Enzel tensed his fists.
—“Oh, yeah? Let’s see how good a hunter he is when he faces my claws!”
Ul calmly raised the vehicle’s defenses.
—“That would be a waste of time. They hide so well that seeing one is considered good luck.”
—“So we can’t do anything?”
—“Not particularly. If it fails to hunt us down in a couple of days, or if we enter an area that’s too open, it’ll leave.”
—“Days?!”
Ul shrugged.
—“Annoyingly persistent.”
The metallic defense wrapped around the vehicle, softening the occasional impacts of spines launched from the shadows. However, the environment began to change: the air grew denser, a reddish smoke started to embrace everything, and dry crackling echoed in the distance.
—“Hey! I saw something move! Something huge, flying!” Enzel warned.
Ul switched on a light in her visor.
—“Hmm… We may have caught the attention of a Scorched. Get ready.”
—“Even if there are several of them, together we can defeat them! I myself could take on a hundred alone”
—“Great because you’ll handle it alone.”
—“What?!”
—“These demons are formidable. It’s a good moment to teach you how to fight… properly. After all, your attempt to kill me left a lot to be desired.”
Enzel frowned, remembering with disgust the incident under New Lucifer’s control. Before he could think of a strategy, a demon emerged from the mist. Perched atop a stone column, its body looked like a living brazier, exhaling burning vapor with every breath. It remained there, staring straight at them.
With a deafening roar that shook the air, the Scorched spat a stream of lava in front of them, drawing an incandescent line across the rock.
Enzel swallowed. It was only one. And yet, his instincts warned him that this fight would be different.
—“Wait. There’s something strange about this one…” Ul muttered.
—“Eh? What’s wrong?”
—“Three horns. Larger than normal. Its color is deep red instead of orange… its muscles look like living embers. And I’ve never seen one spit lava before.”
Enzel tensed.
—“What does that mean?”
—“It’s probably an exceptionally strong mutant.”
Enzel hesitated for a moment, but finally stepped forward.
—“Just tell me how they fight. What should I watch out for? ... Nah, you know what? I’ll handle it myself.”
—“If you say so. Don’t forget to scream if you want me to save you.”
—“Shut up.”
Enzel took a deep breath.
He crossed the line of hardened lava, and the Scorched did not move at first… It looked somewhat confused. Its gaze shifted toward Ul; it seemed to expect both of them to challenge it. Then it looked back at Enzel and began examining him from head to toe. A jackal usually would not be much of a challenge: they were hard to kill, but they did not have much strength. Though Enzel did seem considerably larger than a normal one.
The demon smiled and took a stance, as if preparing for a race. Its muscles crackled like branches catching fire. In the blink of an eye, it launched itself like a living spear toward him.
Enzel barely managed to dodge. The impact against the ground was brutal: the rock split apart in a shockwave of burning fragments.
Before he could react, the Scorched sprang back up in an instant and launched a brutal kick, striking Enzel in the hip. The impact sent him rolling several meters, the air escaping his lungs in a dry grunt.
But Enzel, stubborn as ever, got to his feet, shaking off the ash.
The Scorched briefly shifted its gaze toward Ul, as if considering attacking her. She raised her mechanical arm without any expression.
—“I wouldn’t, if I were you.”
The demon leapt to strike her, but on impact, her arm flared with light, and the Scorched was repelled like a broken doll, heavily crashing several meters in the opposite direction.
—“How the hell…?!” Enzel blurted out.
—“Impressive, isn’t it? Before Christ, some warriors received blessed weapons that no enemy could pierce. I combined the designs of two of them into my arm. If I block with this, nothing can harm me.”
—“You had blueprints for that?”
Ul smiled faintly.
—“I memorized their designs… watch out!”
Enzel turned just in time to see the Scorched rushing toward him at terrifying speed, a burning silhouette that seemed to pierce through the air. Instinctively, he moved aside, and the demon slammed full-force into a stone pillar, splintering it into a rain of incandescent fragments.
Without losing momentum, the Scorched rose from the rubble and came down on Enzel like an unleashed beast. This time, Enzel crossed his arms and shielded himself from the impact with his scales at the last second. The blow resounded like thunder, but to his surprise, the pain he expected never came.
His scales, which had always been his first and last defense, had evolved. They resisted the impact with unbreakable solidity. What had once only softened blows now seemed to absorb the enemy’s brute force completely.
Surprised, but encouraged, Enzel used the momentum and threw a powerful punch at the Scorched’s head, sending it several meters back. The demon staggered, clearly shocked that its opponent had not only survived the impact, but had also counterattacked with force.
—“ŗ̸͑͗ȅ̵͍̠̽s̷̬̑͌i̸̟͌s̸̡̜͆t̸̖͍͂s̴͔̍̅…”
From a distance, Ul watched attentively.
—“Good. Take advantage while it’s confused.”
Enzel, regaining his composure, quickly thought about how to throw it off balance. Meanwhile, the Scorched straightened, flexing its body with a grotesque crackle. It took an offensive stance, drew one arm back, and with a sudden motion, launched three fireballs straight at Enzel.
Enzel dodged to the side, but one of the spheres grazed his arm, burning him superficially. He let out a grunt of pain, though his scales resisted most of the damage.
Without stopping, the Scorched jumped to another position and fired a new volley of flames. Enzel took cover behind a pillar, shielding himself from the scorching rain.
The demon glanced sideways at Ul, calculating whether it should change targets. She only pointed to her metal forearm, like a silent warning. The message was clear even to the creature: don’t try it.
The Scorched landed in front of the pillar where Enzel was hiding, and its voice rumbled in a distorted murmur:
—“A̶̘̘̍͠p̵̯͂͠p̵͙͐̔ẽ̶̬͝â̵̞̙͝r̷̗̗̃…”
Its hand glowed with barely contained, latent heat.
—“I̶̫̿ ̶͍̊c̶̹̿a̵̚͜n̸̙̐ ̵͉̈s̶͎̀e̷̼͌e̸̛̞…”
The Scorched circled the pillar, searching for Enzel’s arm, which was clumsily sticking out. It advanced with confidence… until something lightly touched its head.
The demon turned its face to the right, bewildered, but before it could react, Enzel threw a handful of dust and dirt directly into its eyes.
The Scorched stumbled back, roaring, rubbing at its face, momentarily blinded. Enzel wasted no time: he charged in with a blow to the skull, followed by another quick strike to the abdomen. However, before he could land a third, the demon reacted on instinct and caught his arm.
With brutal momentum, the Scorched shot into the air, dragging Enzel with it. They rose dozens of meters and began to descend with force. The whistle of the wind deafened them both as they plummeted.
—“Turn it! Get on top!” Ul shouted from below.
Just before they crashed into the ground, Enzel acted. He grabbed the demon’s neck with his free arm and twisted his body as best he could, positioning it as a shield in front of him.
The impact was brutal.
A cloud of dust rose like an explosion, and fragments of rock flew in every direction. Enzel came out battered, but quickly got back up, panting. The Scorched, on the other hand, was left partially buried in a newly formed crater, releasing a guttural growl of frustration.
It slowly rose, a hateful grimace deforming its scorched face.
At that moment, something whistled through the air: a spine launched from the distance.
The Scorched caught it mid-flight effortlessly, turning its head toward the forest it had come from. Something moved among the bushes… and retreated.
The demon turned its attention back to Enzel… and smiled.
The flames around its body intensified like a silent roar. It raised its fist… and struck the ground.
A crack opened beneath its feet, advancing like a straight arrow toward Enzel. He jumped to the side to dodge it, but the moment he touched the ground, the Scorched appeared like lightning and delivered a direct kick to his face, sending him flying several meters and crashing violently into a pillar.
In pain, Enzel pulled himself back up just in time to see an enormous rock being thrown toward him.
With no option to dodge, he crossed his arms to shield himself and took the impact head-on. But while he was still staggering, the Scorched appeared right after it and struck him violently in the stomach, launching him like a doll toward a rocky formation.
The demon rose into the air and descended like a flaming spear, trying to crush him. Enzel managed to move aside at the last second. Wasting no time, he threw a punch at the Scorched, but it caught his fist, pulled him in… and delivered a brutal headbutt.
Enzel felt the impact vibrate through his skull. The demon lifted him as if he weighed nothing and slammed him into the ground.
Dazed, Enzel blindly felt around the terrain and grabbed a small rock. With a desperate motion, he smashed it against the Scorched’s head, managing to make it loosen its grip.
He used the opening to unleash a precise claw strike across the demon’s chest, tearing away a large portion of charred flesh and exposing the pulsing muscle beneath the flames.
Ul shouted from a distance:
—“Their bodies resist blunt impacts, but not sharp attacks! When you fight, test everything you can until you find your enemy’s weakness!”
—“AND YOU’RE ONLY TELLING ME THAT NOW?!” Enzel shouted back.
With sarcasm, Ul replied:
—“You told me not to tell you anything.”
The Scorched rose into the air, and Enzel, alert, recognized the pattern of its movements: it was about to unleash another rain of fire.
The demon released a storm of incandescent magma. But this time, it was not aimed at Enzel. He responded by throwing stones upward, deflecting part of the attack, while the Scorched climbed higher and released a great blaze toward the sky.
Then it descended violently, tearing a stone pillar out by the roots. With one arm, it carried it over its shoulder as if it were a simple staff.
Enzel, thinking quickly, made a provoking gesture, challenging it to attack. The Scorched did not hesitate: it swung the enormous pillar like a hammer, crushing the ground where Enzel had been standing seconds earlier.
But Enzel did not counterattack.
He waited.
The demon struck again, destroying another chunk of rock. Each charge was slower than the last, and the pillar creaked dangerously. Enraged, the Scorched rose while spinning with the pillar in a devastating motion.
Enzel stayed still.
He waited until the very last instant.
The pillar struck… but shattered on contact, exploding into fragments.
From the rising cloud of dust, Enzel emerged like a shadow and launched a powerful kick straight into the demon’s lower jaw. The blow thundered, stunning it briefly.
Enzel did not waste the moment. He lunged with fury and delivered two brutal claw strikes to the Scorched’s arm, tearing through flesh and bone. The arm was left hanging, limp and useless.
The demon staggered back with difficulty. Suddenly, the sky turned a fierce orange. Enzel looked up: the blaze it had launched minutes before was beginning to descend, wrapping the landscape in a rain of fire.
The temperature rose brutally. The ground burned beneath his feet. The plants ignited like living torches.
—“Take this!” Ul shouted, throwing him a thick piece of cloth. “Cover yourself and tie it quickly!”
Enzel covered himself as best he could, protecting himself from the flames now falling like burning rain. It was not perfect, but it was better than nothing.
—“s̴t̸r̷̴o̵̷n̶̶g̷̷…”
The Scorched hunched over. Its body began to crack in an unnatural way. From its charred flesh, new flesh began to sprout, grayish and grotesque.
Its arms deformed, turning into membranous wings. Its jaw stretched, and two enormous fangs emerged. With a roar that shook the earth, it rose into the air.
—“Careful! In that form, they’re much stronger, and they can’t be damaged!” Ul warned.
—“What am I supposed to do, then?!” Enzel shouted.
—“Just endure! It won’t be able to hold that form for long.”
The demon descended like a comet. Enzel intercepted it, stopping its open jaws with both hands. With a titanic effort, he threw it away.
The Scorched returned almost immediately, attacking with its enormous claws.
Enzel dodged by instinct, counterattacking whenever he could. He managed to tear through the soft tissue of its wings, but the wounds closed almost instantly, as if the fire itself were weaving its flesh back together.
The battle dragged on. Minute after minute, Enzel held his ground, but his stamina weakened under the scorching heat. Meanwhile, the Scorched began to deteriorate: the flames around them, which it had unleashed itself, were starting to affect it.
Finally, the surrounding flames died out.
The demon descended heavily, its flesh charring again. With a dull cry, its body ignited in fire and collapsed back into its original form: smaller, more compact… more weakened.
The arm it had lost had regenerated, although its energy had visibly diminished.
Enzel, exhausted and panting, was still standing.
The Scorched smiled… a crooked, dangerous smile. Its body began to shine intensely.
—“Don’t let it get close!” Ul shouted.
Enzel looked at it, bewildered.
—“What, is it going to burn me?!”
—“That’s not it! They can detonate a layer of their skin! You won’t survive an explosion at point-blank range!”
Enzel looked back at the Scorched, which was still smiling. The demon launched itself toward him. Enzel did his best to dodge, but its speed was too much. Then he saw an elongated piece of rock in the distance and began running toward it. The Scorched lunged. Enzel jumped right over it, pushed off its body, and shoved it hard into the ground. He landed near the piece of rock and grabbed it.
—“Hey, idiot, why haven’t you caught me yet? Am I too fast for you?”
The demon charged in fury, grabbing Enzel, and began to glow with intensity, ready to immolate itself. But before it could explode, Enzel drove a powerful headbutt into it, throwing it slightly off balance. When its grip loosened a little, he took the piece of rock and drove it into the demon’s stomach, pushing it away just enough to then swing it like a bat, launching it as far as he could. The demon exploded in midair.
When the dust settled, Enzel saw the Scorched crash heavily to the ground, charred and battered. Even so, with difficulty, the demon rose, staggering.
Its face was expressionless… but it smiled.
—“N̴͕͆e̷͚̓w̷̢̌ ̴̱͝l̴͈͒i̴̗̇g̵̝̀h̸̩̄t̵̯̾.̴̟͆.̸̞̽.̶͙̈ ̷̦̿Ȋ̷̟ǧ̶̣n̴̜̊i̸̦͘z̶̥͌ ̴͚́ȓ̷̜e̶̡͝s̵͔̈́p̴̽͜e̴͇͝c̶̛͕t̶͉͂s.”
The Scorched bowed its head with one hand over its chest and immediately took flight, disappearing into the gray sky.
Enzel blinked.
—“What the hell did it say?”
Ul let out a small laugh.
—“Something about… light and respect. I think you have a fan.”
Enzel snorted.
—“I’d rather not…”
Sore, but still in one piece, Enzel staggered back to the vehicle and collapsed into the passenger seat.
—“Well done,” Ul said.
Enzel smiled weakly.
—“T-thanks…”
Ul took some gauze and bottles filled with a strange liquid from the vehicle. She began treating his wounds. When he felt the first touch against the burned areas, Enzel let out a muffled groan.
—“Sorry…”
After a few minutes, and a few enchanted phrases, Enzel was back in shape, though still aching.
—“That was fast… but why didn’t you use your magic from the start? You know, the healing thing.”
—“It has limitations. There are things I can’t heal or repair; it depends on the type of damage. Also, I have to be precise. If I cut the flesh carelessly for my prosthetics, my magic won’t even work... probably because I don't really practice it”
—“Do you think we’ll see that guy again?”
Ul shrugged.
—“It’s possible. Especially considering this place wasn’t his territory.”
—“How do you know?”
—“Scorched have an obsession with plants. During fights, they always move as far away from their gardens as possible.”
Enzel leaned back in his seat, exhausted but satisfied. The vehicle’s engine roared as they resumed their journey.
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Hope i nailed with writing a fight.
kinda hard.