u/AnthemusadeVouivre

Hi everyone, I'm writing a Danmachi fanfic focusing on the Hedjhotep family, a little-known Egyptian god, and I'd like your opinions on the magic of the family's captain, who is the main character. To give you some context, he's human, 20 years old, the father of two Amazonian girls, and a versatile type, fighting up close, from afar, and in between. He's not exceptional at anything, but he's somewhat skilled in everything. He's never reached an S-rank attribute at any level, for example, but all his attributes at all levels have been at the A-rank. In terms of magic, he acts more as support, although he can attack and defend, as well as confuse. Below are his spells, and I'd like your honest opinion. Thank you for reading this far.

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Note: If there are any errors in the translation, it's because I'm translating from Portuguese to English, okay?

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Anphit Paheri Sennefer Level 5

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Spells: Senne Tyet: This is a wide-area enchantment and attack spell of the light element. It creates several spheres of white light that can change trajectory to hit their targets, and Anphit can also release them all at once to cover a large area or keep some close to him to use them at an opportune moment. Its range is 300 meters, making it one of the best spells in Orario in terms of effective range, and it can eliminate a hundred opponents per use.

Each sphere has enough firepower to knock out a Level 2.

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As the spheres are created, Anphit's body and spear are covered in white light, and a white halo of light materializes above Anphit's head. It slightly strengthens her physical abilities and considerably increases her movement speed, running speed, acceleration, reaction speed, and perception. The light enveloping her body acts as armor, slightly reducing damage from physical and magical attacks. The spear coated in light receives a slight increase in power and penetration. Anphit can also use it to unleash a beam of light through her spear. It is inferior to Alise's Agaris Alvesynth.

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The halo of light above her head can unleash numerous beams of light. The beams spread in all directions over a wide area, describing varied trajectories and striking only the targets, and which can change trajectory to hit their targets. These beams produce a small flash upon impact, momentarily depriving targets of their vision. Furthermore, a single sphere of white light forms in the center of the halo, which releases a burst of light. It's a super short chanting spell.

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Anphit developed this magic because of when he was taken from his mother and later from the goddess Isis. He had to leave the Isis family to avoid putting them in danger while he was being pursued by Elnea and Belnas of the Kali family, who enslaved and abused him, and he desired power to defend himself from his captors.

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Senne Amunet: This is a wide-area illusion, restriction, and debuff spell of the light element. It continuously creates white particles of light from Anphit's body, which then disperse throughout the area of effect. The particles remain dispersed in an area of up to 100 meters around him, while more particles are created throughout the spell's duration. The particles continuously produce mirages of Anphit himself throughout the area of effect, which move according to his will or automatically if he has no interest in directing what each one does, although they are incapable of attacking or defending. When one or more particles come into contact with a target, they become beacons, attracting other particles towards them. If there are multiple targets, the particles are divided equally among them. They envelop the entire body of the targets and reduce their status and weaken the effects of their spells. The moment the targets' bodies are completely enveloped, white halos of light materialize and immediately fly towards the targets to firmly envelop them, forcibly immobilizing them. It's a super long chanting spell.

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Senne Mimus: This is a rare, wide-area healing spell capable of easily restoring multiple targets. It creates a tree of light with white flowers around Anphit. Its branches, leaves, and roots expand, forming a barrier that completely blocks physical and magical attacks. Countless particles of light are released by the flowers and fill the entire interior of the barrier. Upon contact with those protected by the magic, these particles heal wounds, restore stamina, recover the mind, and can cure all types of status anomalies. Its healing power is comparable to that of an elixir, capable of rapidly restoring severely injured individuals as long as they remain within its area of effect. Furthermore, after being touched by the light particles, the protected individuals are enveloped in a layer of light that surrounds their bodies individually, functioning as a second layer of protection. This barrier remains active for a certain period even after the target leaves the area of effect of the magic, and in addition to continuously healing them, it also increases the stats of those affected by it during this time. The tree's flowers also release a certain fragrance that fills the entire interior of the barrier. Those exposed to it receive a temporary increase in resistance against physical and magical attacks. Its effects remain active for a certain period even after leaving the barrier. However, it still has its limits. While it is capable of reconnecting severed limbs and treating serious injuries, it cannot restore lost blood or regenerate completely lost limbs. Therefore, it is also unable to heal soul damage or erosion. It is a super long-lasting chanting spell.