Advice/feedback on creating a pre-launch landing page for my poetry-based worldbuilding Kickstarter
Hello everyone! I am an 18-year-old fantasy enthusiast, passionate about all things fantasy—including fictional races, fantastical creatures, magic, and constructed mythologies.
I am currently preparing to launch a Kickstarter for my project, Canaoseon in Verse. This project aims to construct a vast, mysterious world entirely through poetry. The idea is that backers will gradually uncover the lore and secrets of this realm through serialised poems delivered to them.
Here is a link to my current pre-launch page:
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/canaoseon/484453195?ref=15dxjq&token=d9ddfd0f
Since this is my first time creating a Kickstarter page, I would love to get your honest feedback on a few specific things:
- Is the core concept (worldbuilding through poetry) clear and engaging when you read the description?
- Do the reward tiers make sense, and is the pricing structured clearly?
- Is there anything visually or textually missing that you would normally expect to see on a fantasy project page?
Any advice, critique, or general thoughts would be incredibly helpful. Thank you so much!