u/ArmeroGuayabal

Hey everyone, I have a challenge to you.

I've noticed that people on Reddit have opinions and critiques about the series and how it's writted, much more than on TikTok where the users idolize the series without considering any critical points.

So I'm leaving you with a challenge: how would you fix or change the writing in Solarballs for each arc? Starting with the first major arc, The Moon Revolution.

You can also send visual scene improvements if you want.

I'll leave this to you, I want to read you.

Bye ^^

My case, Theia and Venus.

My case with is complicated, Theia have more things like the writing in her arc or her personality in general(But I really like the ending, I have to say it). But I don't really like how Theia treat Venus, taking him for granted or not thinking about how he feels when he's constantly left out of her life proyect when he literally was helping her since the start.

I don't justify Venus for everything he did either; in fact, in Theia's arc, I even started to dislike him in the flashback (which is impressive that the writers managed to do that). His attitude was toxic with her, even possesive. Mercury was a little rude telling him the true about Theia being "very out of his orbit", but that's not a reason to justify all the Bullying Venus did to him for millions of years.

I feel this was all a serious communication problem from the beginning, a failure to set clear limits (Theia admitted she knew Venus liked her in the end, but she didn't say or clarify anything when she started dating with Proto. And Venus was letting himself be walked all over, besides having had some opportunities to confess and not doing it). They were young, that's one thing, but even with it, they knew some things about limits and what's wrong and right.

But I really like the development of Venus during Theia's arc, he at least tried to redeem himself about everything, he confess the true and in the present he seems much better after Theia's arc, he's less angry all the time, more kind and more friendly with everyone(specially Mercury) and I think the fact that his redesing have partial atmosphere show that he's starting to love himself more and it's good to see it.

Theia, well, her attitude since the start irritated me, she was almost like the Earth before his redemption, but kinder and less mean, but she has an ego, oh yes she had it. At least for the first half of the arc and almost in the final chapters, I disliked Theia a lot, because of her attitude, the writing and how she treat Venus or Proto at the start(Proto has a point, Theia just had to say her name, not her life story which she didn't even have, she only had, like what, one day awake?)

There it is, I don't remember much more.

Ok, I want to read your inconsistencies or quesrions withour an answer in Solarballs series.

For example in "What if Planets Collide?" We see how the Earth and Luna discover that they were born from a collide, the video ended with them screaming because of that. But what happened next? They told him something more? Because in a situation like that, you want to know how was it and why it happened.

Now in the Planet X arc in the Solarcards round, we seen that Earth and Luna didn't know about Theia, here began the Earth's trance. Mars and Venus probably just told him about the collision, but then they didn't mention Theia during that explanation? Why do Earth and Luna seem to be acting like they don't know this important detail about a Collision?

IDK, it's just my opinion.

Me 1st.

Venus: Venus has potential to have an arc, specially in past and present. I think he can have an improvement arc of his past actions and feelings, at the same time, we delve deeper into them(for example, we have the information that Venus had conditions to harbor life in the past, something that will definitely be shown to us in a future arc) Also explores everything he must have felt during his grief after Theia's death.

Above all, how he can improve in the present after what happened in Theia's arc and discover that Theia forgive him. He would learn how to accept himself, forgive himself and begin to be kinder and above all, love himself(I think part of his new design show us this; It's confirm that he hides his atmosphere to look cooler, with a partially revealed atmosphere, suggesting that he has begun to accept itself more)

What do you think?

I was seeing people tier list, I'm a little new here in Reddit, so I wanted to start sharing my tier list too

Pd: I didn't find Sarah Roth, so, she's in the last one.