Streets of Laredo (two personal items)
I am devoted to Lonesome Dove and its sequel Streets of Laredo. As concerns the latter, two issues always aggravate me while reading it.
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Toward the end, there is a section or two where, in an effort to assist Captain Call, Charlie Goodnight goes searching for Mox Mox, only to find that that the man-burning "squint" has already been dispatched. For me this odyssey slows down the narrative and seems like a mere "filler" or at best a device to disclose to the character that, although he became informed of Mox Mox's fate, still failed to apprehend or kill him. In a sense, a wasted trip and too many pages devoted to describing it.
The other thing is - and many, many have voiced their discontent over this - is McMurtry's random killing off of so many characters from the original novel. Newt is killed by the horse that Call had given him. Clara Allen actually enters the story, but three years later she too is pawed to death by her prize horse, Marbles. Bolivar, "the last of the Hat Creek boys", dies on the very day Call delivers him to a Mexican boarding house. Etc. Clara could have been left to die of old age, Newt could have simply been permanently estranged from Call, but not killed - and so on.
I always feel that the author deemed that so many deaths were somehow requisite for his narrative, but I am uncertain why that is...