
How I would NOW write a One redemption arc
G’day mates, Mr. TV here. Today I am going to lay out my vision for a potential One redemption arc, but you probably be wondering ‘but Mr. TV, haven’t you already done this four months ago?’ Actually, yeah I did, but here’s the thing… that didn’t age well.
Yes, it was made way before the whole trilogy was announced, but it’s now past TPOT 22 and the whole trilogy sounds like something that will keep One as a major threat for a while. My old concept had her getting redeemed way too quickly and I feel like the whole ‘civil war’ concept where One, Two, and their allies face Four, Three, X, and their allies was a bit too messy and would divide the contestants even more than they already are. It just felt forced for the sake of drama and didn't really fit the tone of the show long-term.
Also, full transparency: I’m making this post not only because I feel like my previous vision aged poorly, but also because I honestly desperately need some post ideas right now and this was the only thing I could come up with that felt worth writing. So yeah, time for a proper re-do. This version ditches the rushed redemption and the super-forced civil war vibes from my old post. Instead, we're going for something slower, messier, and way more grounded in the actual lore we've seen develop. I'm not laying out a full episode-by-episode breakdown this time (though if people want one I can drop a follow-up), just the core pillars of how I'd handle One's arc post-trilogy.
Origins of the arc:
Instead of starting way before TPOT 25 (though it would be massively hinted throughout the two episodes leading up to it), it would start after the massive battle in TPOT 25, where Two, the contestants, and many others defeated One in an epic, hard-fought climax. Four was about to send One to the moon once again, clearly haven’t learnt anything from last time, but then One snaps at Four… you know what? Screw it. I’m not gonna give you a full recap on my fanmade script for TPOT 25 here (check the post down below if you want the full blow-by-blow). Let’s just move on.
Alright, now let’s talk about some of the things that my vision would include. You have probably seen most of these ideas on my “Peak One Redemption Arc vs Bad One Redemption Arc” post I made a while back, but let’s go through them in a bit more detail this time.
- Solitary confinement matters, and the story would say that out loud.
One major thing about One discourse that I feel like gets glossed over way too often is that people treat her villainy like it came out of nowhere, like she just woke up one day and decided to be evil. But that’s not how it works, and frankly, that’s not how people work either. As we saw in canon, we knew why One became who she became. She was locked away in the moon for fourteen years. Fourteen years. That’s not a punishment, that is torture. Full stop. Even the United Nations recognises solitary confinement exceeding fifteen days as torture. Fifteen days.
Nearly every scientific inquiry into the effects of solitary confinement over the past 150 years has concluded that subjecting an individual to more than 10 days of involuntary segregation results in messed up shit like anxiety, panic attacks, perceptual distortions, hypersensitivity to stimuli, paranoia, memory loss, difficulty thinking, depression, and post-traumatic stress disorder. That’s from just ten days. Ten. Now imagine fourteen years.
What I want my version of the arc to do is acknowledge the root cause of One’s villainy. The arc has to look the audience dead in the eye and say: this is what fourteen years of isolation did to a person. This is the direct, documented, horrifying result of prolonged solitary confinement, and the fact that it happened to a god-like entity does not make it less real as a concept. However, I want the arc to have One not acknowledge that, and make her believe that she’s far beyond saving and that she deserves every bit of the hatred being thrown at her. That self-loathing and resigned acceptance of her own monstrousness is part of what makes the arc compelling. She walks out believing she is fundamentally, irreparably broken. Someone else has to be the first one to push back against that belief, and that should be someone like Two (which I will get to in a second).
- Everything would tie back to Four
Here’s the part of One’s backstory that I feel like the fandom constantly dances around without ever fully confronting: Four did this. He was the one who led the whole “sealing One in the moon” group. He was the one who made the call. He saw what happened with Three, he saw One’s desperation and grief after the accident, and instead of showing any kind of compassion or understanding, he decided the answer was to lock her away in complete and total isolation for what was presumably meant to be forever. And then he just… moved on. He flew off with X, found Earth, started a game show, and spent the next fourteen years screeching contestants, zapping people, mutilating objects for fun, and sending eliminated players to eternal algebra class.
Yeah, One erased Gaty, yeah, One spent fourteen years building a revenge plot and actually executing it flawlessly, yeah, One killed Three in cold blood. But let’s be real:
If it wasn’t for Four, none of this happens. No revenge plot. No erased contestants. No catastrophic events. No chaos. None of it. Four made the call, Four set the trap, and Four walked away without a scratch while One spent fourteen years alone in the dark, slowly losing whatever was left of herself.
Not only should it tie back to Four’s sealing of One, but also tie back to everything he has done as a host throughout BFB. The screeching. The zapping. The mutilating. Sending eliminated contestants to the EXIT, which, let’s be real, was just eternal algebra class, a place no one consented to and no one could leave. Sending X to the Burn and Limb Reattachment Center. Casually almost killing Gelatin with Zappies because he got hit by a fork. Y’all probably be like ‘but didn’t Four get redeemed after being called out by Gelatin in BFB 30?” Yeah, but let’s be honest, that was half ass and guess what? Four clearly have learnt nothing because in TPOT 6, he went back to his old ways of screeching contestants like it was nothing. So no, Four has not learned anything. His BFB “redemption” was surface level at best, and the story needs to reckon with that fully. The perfect arc doesn’t let Four off the hook for any of it.
So that’s why Four should be the main antagonist of the arc. Not the villain of the whole show going forward, just the antagonist of this specific arc. The person whose actions need to be answered for. Because when you actually lay it all out like that, Four’s moral ledger is… not great. He locked away a vulnerable, grieving person for what was presumably meant to be eternity. He started a game show and ruled it under an iron fist. He has abused so much people. And he acts like he’s the hero even though he has done all that. The arc should be the conclusion of Four’s story in BFDI. Yep, that’s right. I said what I said. Four’s arc ends here. If One’s redemption arc is done right, Four doesn’t walk away from it with his hosting gig intact and his reputation untouched. Once he gets defeated, he should either get depowered or exiled. I also came up with the idea of him gets a taste of exactly what he gave One but nobody does deserve solitary confinement, not even Four. That would just repeat the cycle of trauma instead of breaking it.
- The arc would be messy, long-term, dramatic, and emotionally raw
If One were to have a redemption arc of some sort, it can't be some clean, tidy little character turnaround that wraps up in a couple episodes with everyone hugging it out by the end. That's not how real trauma, guilt, or fractured relationships, especially not after everything One has done and everything that's been done to her. No quick "I'm sorry" montage, no single heartfelt conversation that magically fixes fourteen years of isolation-induced psychosis and a trail of erased contestants. This has to hurt to watch, in the best way possible.
One has to try her absolute hardest to make things right, but the universe just keeps kicking her while she's down. We’re talking constant rejections, old grudges flaring up, people flat-out refusing to even hear her out (let alone forgive her), and setbacks that feel genuinely crushing, all while being hunted down by Four, who is dead set on finishing what he started seventeen years ago, which leads to me to my next point.
- The situation regarding Three
On paper this might feel off-character for Three given how she was before the shattering. Before getting killed, she was all friendly, caring, energetic, basically the peppy mother hen of the Equation Playground who looked out for everyone and got excited over the little things. But that doesn’t mean that trauma can’t completely warp someone, especially after what One did to her.
In my vision, Three gets completely recovered AFTER the battle in TPOT 25 by maybe Four. Three comes back fully aware of what happened, the betrayal by her former friend, the horrific way she was shattered and glitched, the things One has done after escaping the moon, and now finding out that Two is helping One out with her trauma and offering her a path to redemption. Three is OUT FOR BLOOD! Like, full-on vengeance mode.
Three doesn't buy the "solitary confinement broke her" explanation at all, dismissing it as a pathetic excuse to cover up everything One has done. To her, solitary confinement doesn’t excuse anything. Three sees One not as a broken victim, but as the monster who murdered their bond and her in the worst way imaginable, then spent 14 years stewing in revenge while the rest of the world tried to move on, only to escape and unleash hell on literally everyone around her.
And honestly? From Three’s perspective, can you really blame her?
Three would team up with Four to “save the world from One,” which creates one of the most emotionally painful dynamics possible for this arc. Because now you’ve got One being hunted down by not only the person who ruined her life and turned her into the turned her into the villain she became, but also by the person who at one point was her only friend in the world and someone who made fixing her as her whole purpose when she became a villain, but at least she isn’t alone this time around.
- Two as the deuteragonist
This is where things get really interesting to me, and honestly the part of this whole vision I’m most excited about.
Two is known for being empathetic, easygoing, and genuinely warm, so they wouldn’t be really known for holding grudges and they are probably the perfect character to make One snap out of her “I am beyond saving” mentality. But there’s something way deeper than that driving my choice of Two as deuteragonist, and it all comes down to one word: parallel.
TPOT 21 showed us many parallels between One and Two when Two was talking about their backstory to Price Tag. Both of their backstories have a theme of being outcasts and not fitting in. One was actively ignored, pushed around, and excluded in the Equation Playground, desperately trying to make friends and only ever finding one in Three. Two, meanwhile, left the Equation Playground after the whole 2009 incident between One and Three, and they went out to find somewhere they could belong. And honestly? That search didn’t go great either. They tried on a few facades, explored many different planets, and even went to Earth to meet up with Four and X again, but nothing quite stuck. Four and X barely remembered them when they finally showed up on Earth. The facades never really clicked. The connection never landed the way Two hoped it would. But the only difference between Two and One’s backstories is that Two never lashed out or killed anyone. They just kept moving. They kept searching. They swallowed their loneliness and channelled it into something constructive instead of something destructive. They end up stealing 40 contestants from Four’s show and end up becoming one of the best hosts ’we’ve ever seen in this series.
But here’s the thing that makes this parallel hit even harder in the context of a redemption arc for One: Two knows. They know what it feels like to be outcasted by everyone they know and how crushing it is to be the one no one quite makes room for. Not only that, even though they haven’t been isolated for fourteen years, they know exactly what extreme loneliness can do to a person. Two knows that when you are left without a place, without people, without anything to anchor yourself to, the human (or Algebralian) instinct doesn’t disappear, it festers, it curdles, it turns you into someone unrecognisable.
Even though Two made it their mission to defeat One and end up being successful at it, they don’t want the cycle to continue, and they see One as someone who is just broken and desperately in need of someone, anyone, to reach out instead of pushing her further away. Two gets that extreme isolation doesn’t just make you lonely; it fundamentally rewires you. It turns the kindest person into someone capable of horrors they never would’ve imagined. And Two knows this not just from books or empathy, but from their own lived experience of drifting through the universe, never quite fitting in anywhere.
So Two becomes One’s mentor and her biggest supporter in her road to redemption. Two has seen the damage One caused firsthand. They ran a whole challenge around defeating her, for crying out loud. But Two also gets it on a level almost no one else does and they also know that nobody deserves that long of extreme isolation, not even the person who just tried to upend the entire universe out of rage.
Their dynamic is one that is genuine and emotionally layered. You’d see Two challenging One’s belief that she’s irredeemable, vouching for her, and bonding with her over shared experiences of feeling like an outsider. Two would also help One heal from her trauma and be a better of herself through stuff they learnt from Gaty when it comes to therapy and emotional support. Two's picked up a lot from those couch vent sessions and applies that understanding with genuine care and patience. This would allow for meaningful scenes where One can actually open up about her experience without being judged, dismissed, or weaponised against, something One clearly needs and has literally never had in a healthy, non-transactional way her entire life.
And here’s the part that genuinely defines who Two is in this dynamic: One erased Gaty. Gaty. Two’s best friend. After Gaty’s disappearance, Two was left depressed and bedridden for an entire year, unable to even perform their hosting duties. That’s not something you just shrug off. And yet Two would still choose to reach out to One, not because they’ve forgotten what One did, but because Two understands, on a bone-deep level, that holding a grudge and punishing someone who is already broken beyond recognition doesn’t bring Gaty back. It doesn’t undo the damage. It doesn’t fill the hole. And Two knows that better than anyone.
But Two also knows that letting One rot, either back in the moon or just alone, doesn’t fix anything. It just breaks her even more until she becomes full-on irreparable. And Two, of all people, knows that the world doesn’t get better from leaving broken things alone to fester. You fix them. You try. Even when it’s hard. Even when it costs you something. Because Two has spent their entire existence doing exactly that.
And also, Two would despise Four for what he did. Because here’s the thing about Two that I think gets overlooked a lot: Two is not just some cheerful neutral host who floats above the drama. Two has receipts on Four. They have seen what Four has done to his contestants, what he has done to X, and he has also saw how Four led the other algebralians to seal One in the moon which is the undisputed root cause of One’s villainy. Two watched Four seal One away and walk off like nothing happened, like he didn’t expect her to find a way to escape and go on a revenge tour on the entire universe. So, in this dynamic, One and Two would plan on taking down Four for good, not just stopping him but making sure he can never do it again. Because Two and One both had enough with Four’s nonsense. And honestly? That’s something Two should have done years ago. But that’s a hill Two is willing to die on, because they have seen firsthand what happens when broken people get left to fester, and they know what Four has done as the host of BFB. And to Two, enough is enough.
- X’s Loyalty Crisis
X and Four’s relationship is one of the most fascinating and genuinely heartbreaking dynamics in the entire BFDI series when you actually stop and look at it clearly, and I think it deserves way more scrutiny than it gets.
On the surface, they look like best friends. They’ve been together since the very beginning, back in “X Finds Out His Value” in 2008, and yet when you actually zoom in on the specifics of how Four treats X, it starts looking a lot less like a friendship between equals and a lot more like a toxic imbalanced dynamic where X is stuck in the role of the loyal sidekick who gets hurt, literally and emotionally, on a regular basis.
Throughout BFB and into TPOT, we’ve seen Four casually screech X, send him to the Burn and Limb Reattachment Center, dismiss his feelings, and treat him more like an extension of himself than a true partner. X gets zapped, yelled at, and emotionally sidelined, yet he keeps coming back with that unwavering loyalty. It’s played for laughs a lot of the time, but it’s about time X has enough and enough and starts questioning it.
In my vision for the arc, X remains extremely loyal to Four for most of it. He’s on the “save the world from One” team with Four and backs his decisions, even as things get messier. But cracks start to show. He begins to question his friendship with Four, question if he’s Four’s lapdog or an actual friend. The dynamic between Four and X gets put under a microscope in a way the show has never really done before, and I feel like an arc involving One, someone who has a lot of history with the two, would be the perfect time.
X begins quietly questioning things. Little moments at first. The arc would put their dynamic under a microscope in a way the show has never really done before. We’d get scenes where X reflects on all the times he’s been hurt, how Four’s casual dismissiveness has left him emotionally stunted, and whether this loyalty is genuine friendship or just habit/fear of being alone.
It wouldn’t be until the second to last episode where X finally has it with Four. Maybe One and Two privately confronts X in a surprisingly empathetic way. Not to manipulate him, but because the two sees X as a good person but trapped in a really unhealthy dynamic. They would question him if he thinks that the friendship between him and Four is toxic, if he has seen how he has treated him. One, drawing from her own isolation trauma, might even point out how Four’s pattern of control and punishment (sealing her away, the EXIT, the casual violence) mirrors how he’s kept X in line.
It wouldn’t be until the final battle (most likely the episode before the show’s finale) where in the middle of it, X would SUCKER PUNCH Four right in the face, sending him to the ground. He just stands there for a few seconds before he begins to pummel Four in pure rage. Three would try to stop X but she gets hit with a clothesline by X, sending her flying across the battlefield. The shock on everyone's faces would be insane. X, the ultimate loyalist, turning on Four in the heat of the moment. X would walk over to One and Two and finish the battle on their side.
- The messy rivalry with no easy villains (except maybe Four)
The core conflict would pit One + Two (backed by most of the contestants and some of the algebralians like Seven, Six, Eight, and Nine) against Four + X (with Three and rogue contestants/algebralians). Four is hunting down One while One and Two are planning on taking Four down for good, so the core of this arc becomes this brutal, drawn-out rivalry.
What makes this perfect (in my opinion) is that there are no true villains on either side for the most part. However, you can make the argument that Four is the closest thing to one because he's the root cause of so much of this mess, his decision to seal One away, his history of abusive hosting, and his refusal to learn from any of it. But even then, it's not cartoonishly evil. Four just holds a massive grudge and can’t let go of the fact that One nearly upended everything he built. From his perspective, he's protecting the world from a proven threat who already erased people and tried to seize ultimate power.
One & Two’s side represents redemption, accountability, breaking cycles of trauma, and giving second chances even when it's uncomfortable and risky. They argue that solitary confinement is probably the worst thing you can do to someone and One is a prime example of what happens when you take someone already struggling with loneliness and exclusion, then crank that isolation up to fourteen years of absolute nothingness. They also argue that Four has done more than enough damage and needs to be taken out for good. One and Two’s side would push hard for the idea that true justice isn’t about endless punishment or repeating the same mistakes that created the problem in the first place. They’d highlight how solitary confinement isn’t just a punishment, it’s a form of torture with well-documented, devastating long-term consequences as seen with One. They’d argue that true progress means confronting the harm caused by both One’s actions and Four’s choices, rather than repeating the same punitive cycle that created the original problem.
Meanwhile Four & X’s side represents order, justice through strength, and protecting what they’ve built. Their mantra is essentially “save the world from One.” They view her as an irredeemable monster whose past deeds demand permanent containment. They also dismiss her reputation as quote on quote “manipulation”. They believe that One is manipulating everyone to believe that she has turned over a new leaf when in fact, she is using that excuse to worm her way back into power and finish what she started. From their perspective, the only safe option is permanent containment or elimination of the threat. They also perceive Two as either a traitor or a victim of One's influence, saying that Two needs to be saved/punished for their treachery.
In the post I made four months ago, I gone all out with the whole thing, making contestants pick a side like a civil war within the show. However, while that sounds like a sick idea, that would just risk turning the arc into something far more divisive than the show typically handles. In this revised vision, I am scaling things back significantly. The rivalry remains brutal and long-term but almost all the contestants are on Two and One’s side (mostly because they are apart of Two’s show) while some contestants become rogues and side with Four either because they are close with him during the early BFB days, they also think One is irredeemable, or out of fear (maybe Four recruited/manipulated them and threatened consequences if they refused).
This rivalry would go on until whenever the show is up to the final 3 and the final battle will take place on the second to last episode. It would be brutal and emotional and would also determine the future of BFDI itself. Will One & Two’s side get defeated and the series gets ruled under an iron fist, or will Four & X’s side get defeated and we usher into a new era for the show, one where totalitarian regimes and brutal punishments are out of the question, and shows are built on opportunity and fairness.
- The arc would feel like a actual redemption arc
An actual redemption arc is all about the former villain making things right and facing the full weight of what they’ve done, not just saying sorry and calling it a day. In my vision, One doesn’t get to skate by with vague “I was wrong” speeches or abstract atonement. She has to confront the direct, personal damage she caused, head-on, while the world (and especially Three and Four) keeps trying to drag her back down.
This means One actively works to undo what she can. She restores erased contestants like Gaty, helps rebuild the grasslands back to its former glory after all the chaos from her revenge plot, and tries to fix whatever lingering damage she left on the Earth and beyond. But it’s not just big flashy fixes, she has to deal with the personal, gut-wrenching stuff too. One needs to directly confront the people she hurt most, own every bit of the fear and destruction she caused, and actively work to make it right in ways that cost her something, all while being hunted down by Four. However, her partnership with Two would make it much easier for her. Two can vouch for her when it comes to burying the hatchet with certain people, help her as a mediator when things get heated, and just genuinely support her through the process.
- One’s redemption arc would be a major success
Finally, most redemption arcs in media are mainly successful stories at their core, and this one has to be no different. If One goes through all this hell, the self-loathing, the constant rejection, the brutal setbacks, the physical and emotional warfare, the atonement work, only to get defeated at the end and sent back to the moon (or worse), then what was the point? The whole arc would feel like revenge porn dressed up as depth, and it would completely undermine the themes of breaking cycles of trauma that the story would be trying to explore
One has to earn her redemption through struggle, failure, and genuine growth, but it has to land. After everything, she succeeds. Not in a “everyone forgives her instantly and sings kumbaya” way, because that would be fake as hell. But she gets recognized as someone who has transformed. She becomes capable of empathy, growth, and making amends even if full forgiveness from everyone (especially Three) takes a long time or never fully comes.
At the end of the arc, it will be the first time One ever felt belonged and not all alone like in the Equation Playground days or those endless fourteen years in the moon. No more fractured sense of self, no more emotional numbness turning into rage. She earns a place where she can actually grow. She would finally have a community, a support system, and a new best friend in Two. That’s right, Two would become One’s new best friend after they turned her into a completely new and better person. And yeah, that’s going to hit different when you remember that 1, One ruined Two’s life and Two was literally the person who led the effort to defeat One, and 2, One spent almost her entire life with no true friend or anyone she could actually lean on. And Two, her former rival and victim, the one who had every right to despise her for everything she put them through and kill her, not only became that person she could lean on, but also be the one who saved her life and made her a better person than she ever thought she could be.
That hits way more harder than any ‘enemies to friends’ arc we ever seen. Because it isn’t just two people burying the hatchet. It’s about a person pulling their ‘enemy’ out of the darkest, most hopeless part of themselves and saying “you are worth saving” even though that enemy has spent months ruining their life and yet they still chose to extend a hand instead of a fist. It’s not just textbook maturity from Two, but the fact that they had every right to consider One dead to them and yet chose not to. That’s not just forgiveness. That’s something rarer and harder and infinitely more meaningful than forgiveness. That’s Two actively choosing to be better than the situation demanded of them. They turned a broken, twisted person who is ‘beyond saving’ into a new version of her past self or even better, because back in the old days before the Three incident, One was kind, eager, and just desperate for someone to call her own, and now she’s back to where she is or even the best version of herself all thanks to Two.
Anyway, that’s everything I’ve got for my new vision that is up to date and honestly much better. This got way longer than I intended but honestly? I regret nothing. If people want a proper episode-by-episode breakdown of how this arc would play out, drop it in the comments and I’ll probably do a follow-up post at some point. But for now, this is the vision. Let me know what you think, tear it apart, whatever.