Haint Holler, Horsepen

My grandfather grew up in the small coal mining town of Horsepen. In that town there were a few hollars, little valleys where families could settle down. These people protected their land, but one hollar on coal company land seemed to be protected by something else.

It was named Haint Holler because of the odd noises that echoed through its hills. Even during the day the place seemed darker than it ought to be, the trees thick and close together. A groaning noise that could only be heard in the quiet hours of night. When no work was being done, and when one was all alone. Everyone in the valley would quicken as they crossed by the mouth of that hollar, and horses seemed to take notice as well. Many stories were told of them throwing their riders while going past.

One night my grandad found himself in one of those stories. His aunt had been sick for some time, it took a turn then, and he was sent out to get the town's doctor. With only the pale light of a half moon he navigated the empty town, taking the fastest route without thought. Until he came to the maw of Haint hollar. He slowed even then, questioning if he should go around. His aunt needed care though, so he continued. The thick trees took his only light, and between them he hard that mournful groan. The air seemed to stand still. When he was to the side of Haint hollar's deepest part, the sound faded, and he stopped.

A crunch rang out beside him, and through the pitch black he looked. He saw nothing there, the trees and the rocks sat just behind the veil of night. Slowly he went on, all too aware of how much noise he was making. Then in between the sound of his own, two more footfalls came from the woods. There was still nothing, no evidence the noise had happened at all. He quickened his pace, running away from the hollar, but once he was out he looked back.

The light of the moon gave him a new confidence, but there in his path where he had been was the eye shine of a tall figure, lost to the darkness behind it. And the footsteps didn't stop. Now he ran, and anytime he slowed he heard its steps over his own, and the groan that belonged in the dark recesses of Haint hollar.

My grandfather did not dare look behind him then, but he feared the doctors house was too far away. Closer to him was the property of his kin, a familiar place to retreat to, but not a safe one. Resting in the flat part of another hollar was the shack of a man he called his uncle. My grandfather was used to working for him for some spare change, but he knew his habit was to fire his gun blindly out of his one window at any noise he heard in the night. But the noise, was steady, the footsteps were bearing down on him, so he ran towards what he knew.

The moment he saw the house a shot cracked through the air, shattering the quiet of the night. My grandfather ducked, and called out that it was him. After the shot he no longer heard his pursuer, but he knew it could have waited in the hills around the house. The door opened, just a crack at first, but fully when my grandad jumped onto his porch.

The man had some words for my grandad, until he heard his story. He was reluctant, but eventually accompanied him to the doctors house. As they were leaving his uncles holler my grandad looked back just once, and there in the hills was the same eye shine, watching, waiting.

After they got the doctor, they took the long way around to avoid Haint hollar.

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u/Brilliant_Horse4463 — 14 days ago

The hard part

Starting a story is always the hard part. It’s the middle, when you’re getting through it that, also gets kind of rough. But the end is easy! But knowing where to end, that is the hard part…

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u/Brilliant_Horse4463 — 19 days ago
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The Greenwell Hotel

Hi, I just finished my book recently, and I’m trying different ways of putting it out there. It’s a horror mystery with some fantasy and romance elements.

Elena has already stayed at the Greenwell Hotel longer than she meant to. The work is steady, the place familiar, and leaving always seems easier to think about than to do. Strange things happen in Greenwell, but the hotel keeps running, and so does she.
Jared arrives looking for answers. He does not come to fit in or settle down. As the old structures of the town start to fail, he is drawn deeper into the layers of false worlds and hidden powers buried beneath Greenwell. What first looks like a haunting reveals itself as something far worse, a system built to endure, no matter how many people it consumes.
Elena and Jared are forced to choose between leaving Greenwell behind or staying long enough to understand what it truly is. Loyalty, survival, and responsibility begin to pull in different directions as the line between the ordinary and the unnatural wears thin. Leaving may be possible. Staying may be necessary. Either choice comes with a cost.
Told through moments of quiet intimacy and sudden, violent spectacle, The Greenwell Hotel is a slow descent into cosmic horror and moral exhaustion. It is a story for readers who pay attention, where every space hides something deeper, and where understanding the truth does not mean escaping it.

If any of that interests you, I hope you can check it out!
- https://a.co/d/03pr6XmG -

u/Brilliant_Horse4463 — 22 days ago

My book- The Greenwell Hotel

Original art! Unique combination of horror, fantasy mystery and romance!

Elena has already stayed at the Greenwell Hotel longer than she meant to. The work is steady, the place familiar, and leaving always seems easier to think about than to do. Strange things happen in Greenwell, but the hotel keeps running, and so does she.
Jared arrives looking for answers. He does not come to fit in or settle down. As the old structures of the town start to fail, he is drawn deeper into the layers of false worlds and hidden powers buried beneath Greenwell. What first looks like a haunting reveals itself as something far worse, a system built to endure, no matter how many people it consumes.
Elena and Jared are forced to choose between leaving Greenwell behind or staying long enough to understand what it truly is. Loyalty, survival, and responsibility begin to pull in different directions as the line between the ordinary and the unnatural wears thin. Leaving may be possible. Staying may be necessary. Either choice comes with a cost.
Told through moments of quiet intimacy and sudden, violent spectacle, The Greenwell Hotel is a slow descent into cosmic horror and moral exhaustion. It is a story for readers who pay attention, where every space hides something deeper, and where understanding the truth does not mean escaping it.

https://a.co/d/0frHCros

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u/Brilliant_Horse4463 — 27 days ago

Does Anyone Remember The Real life Five Nights at Freddies? I Never Forget It

A few videos I can’t find for the life of me that were too detailed and niche to be forgotten… I remember this guy with maybe 10,000 subscribers who would go wonder around an abandoned restaurant he claimed to be a real Freddie’s location. He played up the mystical horror elements in an obviously fake way, but the building was real, and some elements seemed less staged. Between every video things would change in the old building, new graffiti, “blood,” police tape. The one thing that made the series really stand out in my memory was when he found a real animatronic. The thing was huge, a metal structure covered in ragged foam. This was way before the time of costumes that looked better than what the games had, and that channel never got over 100,000 views, not even close. So there was no income or budget. But there was this haunting thing, wires and metal jutting out, no head. It was gone after 2 vids. Would have thought he would milk something he took that much effort to make. He got paranoid. Went to the restaurant less and less, lost viewers, eventually including me. It is now buried somewhere behind thousands of “real” Freddie’s locations. If it’s still out there.

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u/Brilliant_Horse4463 — 27 days ago