I live in SEPA right outside of Philly and I am looking for someone who can do porting. I have 3 guns I want to get some work done to. I don’t mind driving an hour or two if they are good. Anybody have recommendations?
Hello, I am currently working on my first web novel, and I feel as if my writing has hit a wall. My writing feels incomplete to me. I’m not quite sure what I’m missing or what’s wrong.
This is one of the chapters that I feel is better, but I’m in the process of completely remaking the story. I changed it from a short-format novel, to a much longer web novel.
I’m just looking for feedback on my writing itself. This chapter is meant to introduce the main villain. Any feedback or constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.