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What are the character motivations & why is he here? - Giblet
Everyone interested must die - Dewey was pointless!
The unoriginal issue - Nightmare critters is ok but wrongside outmals was pointless; just make it all about Giblet to give him something!
The Lily lovebraids issue - Lily Lovebraids is just a secondly version of Mommy Longlegs & why her human self was not mention in the younger chapters or heard of her!?
How not to tell a story - Why is almost everything behind in easy to miss notes and records. Especially, the fact that the prototype is the adopted brother of Poppy, aka Poppy Ludwig, in the base plot!?
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Ideas: Simon Smoke was a friend of DogDay and Dewey, and help you in chapter 3 to 5, then get caught Baba Chops, then we get the kill Simon smoke scene. This will make Dewey crash out make sense! Simon Smoke will say something “Hey… it’s ok. I know you need to did this to save the other. I forget you in fact you are going saving me right now because this is the possible only way for me to leave this hell. So, can you good bye for me to Dewey? Thank you… Own angel.”
Pianosaurus are the eyes for yanaby, still out of Pianosaurus line of sight if not he will make noise attracting Yanaby to your location.

Sorry, It has been a long while. But I help with idea: A subspecies of warforged is based on a cyborg commando called the Seishin Shinzō. (a human-like being mind within a pure artificial or pure natural-based body after their world gets consumed by an Alien species and they are housed within their metal body. The cyborgs need to recharge once in a while by eating food, burning wood, drinking gasoline, or using photovoltaic fuel. They can create light weapons through their fingertips. With a short rise, you can create small weapons like a dagger, and with a long rise, you can create big weapons like a battle axe. If you have a normal, you can give a boost attack by filling their weapon with light magic boost, but take 2 hits of danger, but if you are at one HP, you get 10 HP back from this move.) Humans' groups and the aliens’ group are based on in the shards & wedges teams. Humans’ are the shards, while the aliens’ are the wedges. (Sire and carrier)

Any ideas for their culture, traditions, and history?

The shards:
White/blue/green = based on Star Trek
White/blue/black = based on Star Wars
Blue/black/red = based on The x-files
Black/red/green = based on Doctor who
Red/green/white = based on Cowboy Bebop

The wedges:
White/black/green = based on Venom
White/blue/red = based on The blod
Blue/black/green = based on The xenomoroh alien
White/black/red = based on The thing alien
White/red/green = based on Predator alien