u/CasperKarmine

Image 1 — I’d love feedback specifically on structure, prose, and emotional resonance.

Image 2 — I’d love feedback specifically on structure, prose, and emotional resonance.

Image 3 — I’d love feedback specifically on structure, prose, and emotional resonance.

Image 4 — I’d love feedback specifically on structure, prose, and emotional resonance.

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I’d love feedback specifically on structure, prose, and emotional resonance.

I wrote this story, in a series of 5 stories, to specifically work on emotional resonance within my writing. However, I have also been told I have structural issues, so I’d love to know if there are any glaring issues.

u/CasperKarmine — 1 day ago