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I'd love some honest feedback on this flashback scene from my comic.
Does the emotional tone work? Does it make you curious about the story and the relationship between these characters?
If you'd like to see more, the earlier parts are on my profile. Any feedback on the writing, pacing, artwork, or overall storytelling would mean a lot to me.
u/Chance_Fruit4744 — 12 days ago