u/Cheap-Cable3603

I'm a fourteen year old guy in singapore and I have always held a facination for law. I started writing an essay about the leaglity of searching of phones by school administraters. It took me two days to finish with a lot of research. I wanted to know what I can do better going into the future and thats why came to ask for yall's advice
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https://diaryofessays.blogspot.com/