u/CollectionLocal7221

Hello everyone. I am an Ivy League ambitious student, and I would really appreciate if you had any time to look at my college personal statement as I just wrote it a few days ago. I want to get as many people to look at it as possible, and since you all are strangers, I feel like this is the best way to get some honest feedback from y'all, and if you could give me a x/10 score that would also be nice. Thanks!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qZuA4S00lAZHC8zvZONrh7tkoJgiuLDervsDEYkXQho/edit?usp=sharing