u/Corrupted_Vission

My world building, open for constructive criticisms and questions
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My world building, open for constructive criticisms and questions

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My previous post about the power system:

https://www.reddit.com/r/worldbuilding/s/IMsqak29xk

In the year 2028, the people all around the world suddenly see themselves for what they think, like a mirror.

After that, Chaos, chaos worse than war. Instead of fighting for themselves, they fight themselves, they kill themselves, they kill those who they no longer trust, majorly affecting those with mental issues.

High rate of murders and suicide for the last 2 weeks.

The next months, several reports of unusual experiences, rooms warping, bodies disfiguring, objects flying and countless more. 7 out 10 psychiatric and mental hospitals around the globe seemingly disappeared or melted to the ground.

After 4 months, the issue slowly calmed down, researchers worked harder than they should and conducted a world wide program to educate humanity about this.

A new program was initiated to stop the manifestations of unusual phenomena. Unbeknownst to them, not all participated.

Over the next months, simultaneous terrorists attacks rooting from seemingly one group reck havoc all around, they posses inhuman capabilities, same phenomenons reported back then, but it wasn't just humans, animals attacked native lands, Zoo's seemingly erased from their places, ocean waves turned ways they shouldn't because of animal activities.

Then the next year, one country eventually fell while others were slowly getting done. Strong military were struggling, the last time humanity struggled was during World War 1 and 2, but this was said to be worse by historians.

That was until the military also started to use their capabilities. The tides slowly turned, and slowly it was controlled, a new program launched, The Solicitude Institute, they educate those who want to help in the war, and those who aren't are protected. Those individuals who protect people in the city are called the caretakers, one of which is the Safeguard District (those who were raised in the institute and protects from the inside).

Currently, the war is still ongoing, however it's not as bad as before, despite Animalia's still being somewhat of a problem, some Animalia's tend to just take care of their surroundings, acting as the guardians of their areas, this are just avoided to prevent further catastrophic damage in the environment.

More Caretaker groups within the institute were built to protect from the outside, such as the Violent district (governs over raids) and Offensive district (protects from outside the city, preventing enemy invasion)

Also gotta add to the power system:

Eidos State

Partial Eidos state:

Enables an individual to momentarily realize there Identity, this boosting or changing their perception, making there manifestation until they faulter once more. This can only be enabled when an individual can freely think deeply about themselves amidst the situation.

Omega Eidos state:

Enables an individual to fully realize what their identity is, and making them incredibly powerful in exchange for their mortal mindset.

An individual can get out of this state by being strucked by sharp objects in both eyes (double lobotomization)

u/Corrupted_Vission — 5 days ago
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My power system, I am open to criticism

BECOMBILITY

The Source: Identity

Identity is the set of qualities, beliefs, personality traits, and experiences that make an individual or group who they are.

The Source output: Perception

Is how a person sees and understands themselves, however, it is highly believed, and could be concluded to be a fact, that the perception of one's identity to themselves will never be accurate.

The Output manifestation:

Formless Thought Matter (FTM)

This is the manifestation of the perception, not limited to being physical. It is a stateless matter that does not have a single or a true property.

There are four types of manifestations, each unique to every individual, these are:

Zone– they control the effects of an area, ranging from illness to the very concept of death.

Bending– they control objects that are within their sight, examples are rocks or large objects.

Creation– they create objects which then they can control.

Mutability– they control their body, sometimes transforming or stretching themselves.

There can only be one type of FTM, while the properties vary on the individual.

Weakness:

Relying on the selves' mental health, if what they believe faulters, then the manifestation may weaken.

u/Corrupted_Vission — 11 days ago