u/Creative_Bill8815

I was tasked with creating a concept comic book for my school and this is a double spread page meant to depict a boy saving another boy from a robot he conjured from his imagination. The boy on the left is meant to be in a state of somewhat shock and generally the page is meant to feel kind of unnerving while energetic.

Personally I'm not a fan of this piece, I have plenty of issues with it but I'd like to hear any feedback.