u/Critical-Sherbet-538

My first attempt at poetry

Guys, I might just have written one of the worst poems (if you can call it that) you've ever read. It's also my first poem lol. I couldn't sleep, and these words just popped into my head, so this was written at like 12 am. Anyway, here it is:

Your every move plays at my heartstrings

Every look leaves my wondering.

"Was that for me?"

I just don't know how to make you see

How much I like you

It's starting to cloud my view

Not a moment, not an hour gone by

Where I didn't think of you

You're my last thought at night

And my first at first light

There's a whole 'nother side of me

I'm just dying to let you see

On the inside, I'm different to what you've seen

You're the greatest girl that's ever been

Say yes to me, darling

I'll treat you like a queen

I know just rhyme doesn't make it poetry

But I've done what I can to the best of my ability

These are probably the worst verses you've ever read

'Cause these are just words that popped into my head

Birthed by my love for you

Came spilliing into view

Bursting out of my head and--

Babe, I love you

Guys should I give this to my crush or will I get slapped

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u/Critical-Sherbet-538 — 3 hours ago

My first attempt at poetry

Guys, I might just have written one of the worst poems (if you can call it that) you've ever read. It's also my first poem lol. I couldn't sleep, and these words just popped into my head, so this was written at like 12 am. Anyway, here it is:

Your every move plays at my heartstrings

Every look leaves my wondering.

"Was that for me?"

I just don't know how to make you see

How much I like you

It's starting to cloud my view

You're my last thought at night

And my first at first light

There's a whole 'nother side of me

I'm just dying to let you see

On the inside, I'm different to what you've seen

You're the greatest girl that's ever been

Say yes to me, darling

I'll treat you like a queen

I know just rhyme doesn't make it poetry

But I've done what I can to the best of my ability

These areprobably the worst verses you've ever read

'Cause these are just words that popped into my head

Birthed by my love for you

Came spilliing into view

Bursting out of my head and--

Babe, I love you

Guys should I give this to my crush or will I get slapped

reddit.com

My first poem

Guys, I might just have written one of the worst poems (if you can call it that) you've ever read. It's also my first poem lol. I couldn't sleep, and these words just popped into my head, so this was written at like 12 am. Anyway, here it is:

Your every move plays at my heartstrings

Every look leaves my wondering.

"Was that for me?"

I just don't know how to make you see

How much I like you

It's starting to cloud my view

You're my last thought at night

And my first at first light

There's a whole 'nother side of me

I'm just dying to let you see

On the inside, I'm different to what you've seen

You're the greatest girl that's ever been

Say yes to me, darling

I'll treat you like a queen

I know just rhyme doesn't make it poetry

But I've done what I can to the best of my ability

These areprobably the worst verses you've ever read

'Cause these are just words that popped into my head

Birthed by my love for you

Came spilliing into view

Bursting out of my head and--

Babe, I love you

Guys should I give this to my crush or will I get slapped

reddit.com
u/Critical-Sherbet-538 — 3 days ago