u/CyberChoom77

Lonesome Lover

Would be great to hear feedback!

I’ll be your lonesome lover,
Loving you til your last breath
The loner crying to another,
A lover hurt from your death.

We’ll dance around like everyone's watching,
We’ll argue like no one's listening

I’ll be your vibrant colour stained on all your tops,
I’ll be your afternoon sinner cooking you dinner
I’ll be the growing winner among all your crops,
I’ll be the lucky charming lottery winner

You tell me anything's possible,
But is it probable?

You’ll be my lonesome lover,
Loving me til my last breath
The loner crying to another
A lover hurt from your death.

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u/CyberChoom77 — 16 days ago
▲ 12 r/poets

Lonesome Lover - short poem

I’ll be your lonesome lover,
Loving you til your last breath
The loner crying to another,
A lover hurt from your death.

We’ll dance around like everyone's watching,
We’ll argue like no one's listening

I’ll be your vibrant colour stained on all your tops,
I’ll be your afternoon sinner cooking you dinner
I’ll be the growing winner among all your crops,
I’ll be the lucky charming lottery winner

You tell me anything's possible,
But is it probable?

You’ll be my lonesome lover,
Loving me til my last breath
The loner crying to another
A lover hurt from your death.

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u/CyberChoom77 — 16 days ago
▲ 1 r/jobs

I had an interview and they said I was perfect for the role and all of the above, they really liked my experience and that I have a very strong interview. But then I get a call saying I didn’t get it and that they decided by a coin flip. Am I right to think it’s very unfair that this thing I prepped for and tried my best for was just decided by a coin flip and I was rejected. Kind of disregarding the whole experience, skills and answers to the interview questions? Plus the feedback was that I shouldn’t change anything and there’s nothing to improve.

They also only gave 2 second stage interviews as well so they may have either done coin flip after the first one or idk maybe a third interview.

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u/CyberChoom77 — 1 month ago