u/Dazzling_Screen1276

Writing a novel based on the Zodiac. Good afternoon! I need help, I am writing a novel on the Zodiac and I would like feedback on whether the elements I am including are realistic in my world building. Please let me know if I am using Stellium in the right context.  Do you see the Leo traits?
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Writing a novel based on the Zodiac. Good afternoon! I need help, I am writing a novel on the Zodiac and I would like feedback on whether the elements I am including are realistic in my world building. Please let me know if I am using Stellium in the right context. Do you see the Leo traits?

I would love feedback on this snippet of a passage from my novel the 12 Houses. In this scene Ramares and Leonin are arguing over the Leo Twins which are an anomaly in the Nation of Sirius. Would you want to read the full scene? Do you notice the Aries traits and the Leo traits? In this scene I tried to capture the fiery nature of Aries and the flair for the dramatic of a Leo. Please let me know if this resonates with you as Zodiac enthusiasts.

u/Dazzling_Screen1276 — 7 days ago