u/DeathandDestruction2

Things I personally noticed I could improve:

• is making the manmade objects more straight,

• cleaning up my drawing to make it be more sharp,

• incorporating more soft shadows,

• using texture brushes to add a little bit more,

• increasing the contrast and incorporating more middle tones,

• filling the empty space on the wall with textures,

• improving the expression on the face,

• improving the facial structure,

• and increasing the sharpness on the main butterfly to make it stand out more.

• making the backround more detaila and fixing the path.

• fixing the perspectice of the path because it looks cut off

Any critique about anything that pertains to the art would be appreciated.