u/Diligent-Dinner-7567

This is the continuation of my story. (TW: Violence)

This is Part 2 of Many.

Genre: Literary Thriller

Word Count, 18,930

I would love to know in what ways I can improve my storytelling abilities. I would also love to know how you feel about pacing and the level of storytelling so far.

Thank you in advance.

I'm relatively new to writing long stories, but I'm working on one right now, and I would really love some feedback that isn't from my friends or my family. Please let me know what you think.

This is Part 1 of Many.

Genre: Literary Thriller

Word Count, 18,930

I would love to know in what ways I can improve my storytelling abilities.

Thank you in advance.