u/Double-Fisherman1139

So about 2-3 week i started this youtube journey because i wanna help myself quit my daunting nine to five since it’s been a literal hell , then i thought that reddit reads are a good niche that already like since it can be useful info or just plain good stories to tell friends
Now i just want some feedback be it good or bad as long as it’s constructive criticism .
Ireally want to make quality over quantity and im insure how to improve.
I want to know if my hooks are good or need some improvement
Thx in advance