u/Dvrkie2

Would love some feedback! Poem by me

``````Fond lover, why won't you speak?

Quietly we all sit to watch

your beautiful vail; as through its fabrics

your glimmered eyes peak.

Since when do you dawn silence

for something so grave?

I pray help the warmth of my hands

inspire vultures be less depraved.

May whatever flower you soon soil

be as gorgeous as you.

And should they root

through my love so loyal,

then withouth doubt,

You shall bloom.```

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u/Dvrkie2 — 8 days ago