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Would love some feedback! Poem by me
``````Fond lover, why won't you speak?
Quietly we all sit to watch
your beautiful vail; as through its fabrics
your glimmered eyes peak.
Since when do you dawn silence
for something so grave?
I pray help the warmth of my hands
inspire vultures be less depraved.
May whatever flower you soon soil
be as gorgeous as you.
And should they root
through my love so loyal,
then withouth doubt,
You shall bloom.```
u/Dvrkie2 — 8 days ago