u/East-Strawberry-8059

I’ve only ever gotten advice on writing from my brother who’s bee patient as a saint with me I can’t lie and recently I’ve been trying to ease that for him.

So I’ve been asking GPT for writing advice and all it’s doing is Yesmanning me, I can’t stand it in all honesty so I’m here now to ask if someone can give me Writing Advice to make my characters come off less forgettable or to carry plot forward.

I tend to hyperfocus on one scene which stops me from switching scenes and pushing plot forward which I’m trying to fix it.

Thanks!