u/Eastern-Locksmith439

someone willing to read this story and rate it. (first story oat)

The mysterious nightmare:

once upon a long night, I woke up in the middle of the night. Something felt weird, strange… kind of frightening. I thought nothing about it and went back to sleep. After a few hours, I woke up again, this time the feeling was gone. I remembered myself of the night before, and I questioned what happened this specific night. I went to my desk and I wrote down everything I still remembered. When I was finished writing everything down, I have summarized the text written by me and I couldn´t find any answer to the scenario. Therefore, I went to school. However, when I looked around, there was nobody. Not a single soul. After walking a bit further, I realized that there´s nobody else around in this city. I felt alone… really alone. When I arrived at home, I picked up my bike and decided to take it on a ride outside. Suddenly I fell off my bike and got unconscious. After I woke up again, I was in an area, which looked very similar to an office complex. Then I saw the lights flickering, as they were broken. I felt the carpet under my shoes, wet and soggy. The walls looked the same, two different shades of yellow put in the same pattern. It looked like it is just repeating repeatedly, like if the place is infinite. Suddenly I remembered that I have read and seen something about this place. This place is called “The Backrooms”. All of a sudden, I hear something screaming further away from me. I got scared in an instant. I heard its steps getting closer and louder. I decided to start running and hiding. However, when I started to run, I hear the monster running towards me. After I hid in a corner and the steps fainted. I waited a little longer. This repeated for five times and as I hid the final time, I felt that I am getting crazy. I can barely stay calm. Then I found a note on the wall that said, “You will never escape this place. You can try as hard as possible. Soon the monster will get you. It always knows where you are.” That was my final straw. I decided to end this horror and kill myself I thought of some ways to end it fast. I decided to break my neck to eventually escape this place. When I found a nice and safe place, I did it. I broke my neck, but then I noticed that I am still in the same place. I can´t move, I couldn´t even blink or move my eyes. Now I am stuck forever in the backrooms and I will ever hear the static sound of the lights. I see the monster walk past me for the last time. Then I woke up from the dream and felt weird… it felt similar, as I already experienced this. As I looked out of the window, I saw living humans. Living animals. Everything was back to normal. The nightmare felt like years. I decided to write everything down. Therefore, I published the story online and people commented that they experienced something similar. One night after I had another nightmare about the same place. This time I decided to try to find an exit. As I searched for it, I spotted an arrow pointing somewhere. I followed it and saw more arrows pointing to one specific place. At the end, I saw a ladder and a hole in the wall. After I went through the hole, I arrived at a different place. It is scarier and foggy. I instantly heard more entities. I tried to run away, but the monsters were faster. When I thought I would be dead once again, I found the exit. Then I got to another area once again. This time I tried to cheat by destroying a window and climbing on top of the building. When I got on top of the building, I got teleported to an area called you cheated. It says that there is not a single chance to escape now. I noticed that this is the end. Then I was killed. I couldn´t move or do anything again, but this time forever. I am trapped forever. I see monsters walking by. There are so many. There was really no chance that I would survive this place. However, all of a sudden, I can hear and see a human being. As he walked towards me, I realized that he is a real human. As he saw me, he tried to help me, but with success. As I stood up I happily thanked him and we got teleported back to the office area again. With us two, we successfully managed to progress to the first three levels. Then a long hallway with pipes appeared. We started walking forward with caution. As we turn left, we saw a gigantic swimming pool like area. This one feels calm. However, as we looked into the water, we saw a giant eye watching us from beneath. We tried to find an exit, but as we spotted it, the other person whose name was Steven, were caught by an arm rising from the water. As I tried to help him free himself, more arms appeared and he was taken from me. Now we are separated and he´s probably dead. I felt sad, but decided to escape this place. As I walked through the exit, a storage room appeared with some almond water and canned food. When I felt ready to continue, I opened a door. There was a slide. With that the only thing to progress I slid down. Then there was a transparent part and I saw the monster in full length that killed Steven. It was about 500 meters from my perspective and was charging in my direction. Luckily the slide continued and I could see an long, red corridor with a lot of furniture being in the way. Then something pushed me into the corridor and then I suddenly saw an huge group of monsters getting closer towards me. I ran into the corridor and I remembered a sign that previously said “RUN. 10 kilometers of pure running and dodging furniture”. I decided to just sprint and hope for the best. After an eternity of running I finally made it. But it still continues. Now I am in a kids party like place. Another sign stood in the corner that said “find 8 presents to unlock the final exit. As I walked through the place, I collected one present out of eight in total. When I brought it back, I saw an figure that looks like a clown holding a balloon. He chased me down and I tried to find the other seven presents. After a while I had seven out of eight presents and I luckily found the last one. But all of a sudden, the lights got dimmed and I couldn´t see much anymore. As I made my way through the rooms I encountered some more clowns but managed to find the exit door. I sprinted towards the door and placed the last present. After all of that I saw an bright white light shining In my direction from the exit. As I walked through I was happy to be home again. After all of that I decided to do an article about the backrooms and called the weird places “levels”. It started from level 0 and so on. So I updated the backrooms creepypasta and I felt proud of me to be still alive after all what I have done. When my friends read my article, they asked me about the place and they were fascinated about my nightmares. I wish I could´ve brought a camera to bring evidence. A few weeks passed and nothing similar happened. One day my doorbell rang and as I opened the door, three people of an company I have never heard about asked me about my experience. They were called “The Backrooms Company”. As I explained the situation, they invited me to their company. When I asked why, they explained that I could help them do research about the backrooms and analyse, how ordinary people could enter such an place. They also asked me, if I could help them explore to make the backrooms safer that people have a chance to survive. When I agreed they gave my basic stuff for that. A uniform, a weapon to defend myself and an walkie talkie. Long story short the same stuff happens again and again.

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u/Eastern-Locksmith439 — 5 days ago