u/Embarrassed-Pie3859

Help with blurb

I have had difficulties with my blurb, this is what I have come up with. Please let me know if this is good.

A child who gives is a kind child, but what about a child who only gives pain? 

Masaki decided that with his new powers, he would use it to heal anyone who wanted his help, even if it meant their wound would be transferred to him. But after being a victim of a tragedy, he snaps. 

Is Masaki still a kind child? Sometimes. Is Masaki a murderous sociopath who would kill and use anyone who stands in his way? Definitely. Is he also a child who wants to find a friend to dress up and play pretend pirates with? Also yes.

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u/Embarrassed-Pie3859 — 10 days ago