u/Embarrassed_Glove596

Looking for feedback on my memoir

Looking for feedback on my memoir

Hi everyone,

I'm about 90% completed with the first draft of my memoir manuscript titled A Good Son and I'm hoping to receive feedback on the writing. My memoir deals with themes and topics ranging from generational trauma, Christianity, CPTSD, child abuse, neglect, alcoholism, being queer...and filmmaking. My target audience are people who enjoyed memoirs like Jennette McCurdy's I'm Glad My Mom Died. I'm posting the opening chapter of my memoir, but I'd love to share more if anyone is interested.

Thank you!

https://preview.redd.it/r1dd26fwji2h1.jpg?width=1136&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3e1e637f85c40433a4fd1591dedf7e98427bf534

https://preview.redd.it/uur916fwji2h1.jpg?width=1142&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=0fda362171dce45e0037dff19ab482971c8a965c

https://preview.redd.it/orofi6fwji2h1.jpg?width=1167&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=fff4bb9efa3cea9fe0e33d2733a3c802e36062cb

https://preview.redd.it/2chui6fwji2h1.jpg?width=1154&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=0d855146a28ac788efea8e98fb174bc4caae97f6

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