



Looking for feedback
Hi I'm new here and have always wanted to write a book or something like that but never had the time or a good enough idea to turn it into a full fledged product but this has been kicking around in my head for a few months now and I finally started it. I do have a lot of ideas for where this could go some of which even involves a massive series but that's unimportant. This is only the second thing I have ever written with the intention of it actually being somewhat good so any advice helps, hell even tell me it sucks if you feel so inclined.