u/Engipeer3

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Hi I'm new here and have always wanted to write a book or something like that but never had the time or a good enough idea to turn it into a full fledged product but this has been kicking around in my head for a few months now and I finally started it. I do have a lot of ideas for where this could go some of which even involves a massive series but that's unimportant. This is only the second thing I have ever written with the intention of it actually being somewhat good so any advice helps, hell even tell me it sucks if you feel so inclined.

u/Engipeer3 — 2 days ago

Hi so once I get done with my current semester I am going to get started on my first ever project. It's an idea I've had for a while because of a few reasons really but that's not important because I've been struck with such a massive wave of motivation and inspiration that I can't really ignore, I've tried. The problem that I have right now is that I have a lot of characters and interesting ideas for all of them that kind of all converge together to create this mess that I am thinking of. All of them will be spread out throughout much of the story so I was wondering how you would make it clear that one chapter is told from one person's POV or if it is ok to tell some chapters from first person and others from third or if that is some kind of writing sin. Sorry for the simple question but I have literally never done anything like this before.

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u/Engipeer3 — 20 days ago