u/EquivalentSecond6458

yoo guys so i am beginner producer and made this lofi beat lemme how is it

i used a loop for my melody but changed some notes which would go well with my drums and bass

Guys see I am 15 rn and releasing an album. It is just for hobby btw. I was very inspired by the song astaghfirullah by mc stan. For reference lemme show u

Tauba tauba, astaghfirullah, maangu upar wale se maafi

Har raat sochu maine kyun di usko takleef itni bhaari

Maa ko rulaya maine, haan kai baar rulaya

Aaj usi baat ka bojh dil pe maine uthaya

Galti meri thi, ab sir jhuka ke khada hoon

Us har ek lamhe ke liye maafi mein pada hoon

Aaj phir pee li thodi, socha dil halka hoga

Par andar ka khaali pan aur gehra sa hoga

Manager ko bola, chhat ko ghoorta rahoon

Worli nahi, apni duniya mein hi doobta rahoon

Mar chuki hain feelings, ya shayad so gayi hain

Nashe ke bina ye saanse bhi kho gayi hain

Jhooth bolna chahoon, par sach hi nikal aata

Dil ka har tukda apni kahani batata

Main hoon jaisa hoon, bina kisi naqaab ke

Gareebi bhi apni, aur sacchai hisaab mein

Galliyon mein pala, wahin se seekha jeena

Basti ki hansi mein hi tha asli nageena

Kabhi masjid ke dar pe khud ko rokta hoon

Andar jaane se pehle khud se hi tokta hoon

Gunaahon ka bojh hai, dil mein ek khaali pan

Raasta dikhe par samajh na aaye wo safar pan

Tauba tauba, har saans mein naam uska

Maafi maangta phiroon, bas kaam hai ab uska

Maa ki aankhon ka paani ab bhi yaad aata

Har ek aansu mera hisaab pooch jaata

Har din anxiety, har raat bechaini

Har scene, har pal lage jaise hai qaid mein hi

Baap ke jaane ka wo din yaad aata

Ghar ki deewaron pe sannata chha jaata

Samajh aaya ab, kya khoya kya paaya

Door hokar hi maine apnon ko bhulaya

Majboori mein bana main thanda, bana alag

Do waqt ki roti ke liye khud se bhi jang

Kitaabon mein likha tha sahi-galat ka raasta

Par shaitaan ne dikhaya mujhe apna vaasta

Ab khada hoon beech mein, samajh nahi aata

Kidhar jaaun jahan khud ko wapas paata

Aaj hoon ya kal hoon, fark nahi padta

Bheed mein insaan ab insaan nahi dikhta

Phir bhi upar wale se ek hi dua

Dil saaf kar de, aur de de sukoon sa

Main bana apne dum pe, tu bana kismat se

Par sawaal wahi hai, kyun hum hi imtihaan mein

Ramzan mein bhi hum hanste the sacche dil se

Ab raaste bhatak gaye, kho gaye manzil se

Imaan bech ke kya milega aakhir

Naam reh jaayega ya hoga sab mitkar

Sach kadwa hai, par use apnaana padega

Khud se bhaagega to kahan jaana padega

Bas itni si baat hai, dil saaf kar de

Jo bhi galti hui use maaf kar de

Aur agar kabhi yaad aaye mera naam

Dua mein rakhna, bas yahi hai mera kaam

This is what I came up with. And the original lyrics can be searched. Will I be in legal trouble?

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