▲ 17 r/writingfeedback
Looking for feedback on a dystopian fantasy opening
I’m working on learning the craft of writing. It’s not necessarily aimed at being published and is more for practice, but I would love the feedback regardless. ❤️
I’m wondering:
What is working?
What isn’t?
Did you get confused anywhere?
Does this peak your interest?
Thanks 🥰
u/Evening-Sky4231 — 7 days ago