First time getting back into writing after almost a decade. Is it clunky/confusing? One of the feedback I got was that the first chapter was too confusing without the synopsis so here it is:
>In a plane unknown to man lies the Hidden Archive, where every piece of mankind’s unfinished written work takes on a life of its own—called anomalies. Guarding them are the Archivists, who subdue destructive anomalies with their masterwork pens, driving them into their narrative cores.
>Callis Vey is a Junior Lead Archivist in Heartlands, the biome of love and loss. She can see the exact location of an anomaly’s narrative core—something others only study about in manuals. After decades of exemplary performance, she's finally up for a promotion.
>But something ancient emerges from the ink. A new recruit asks dangerous questions. And a name—Soren—keeps appearing where it doesn't belong.
>Callis searches for the truth. What she finds makes her question everything she's worked hard for.
Would appreciate some tips on how I can improve. Thanks!