u/Familiar_Pin_6566

I'm an arch student in Kenya. Im working on a small student centre in a semi arid area. I used the abdomen of the bee to create the facade since our lecs really wanted us to incorporate something cultural in our concept. I've decided to use a courtyard as opposed to a thermal chimney because we are on critical regionalism.

The stepped roof is for cross ventilation and the mass on the left is a double volume for an indoor dining area.

Can you guys critique my concept?

Note, we are not using Revit or any software because they told us they want us to be creative and do it on paper. This is rough idea but I'll appreciate any help.

Thankyouu!