"Like poorly cast die"?

Episode 3 of weird phrases I found in The Simple Wild by KA Tucker. This time the phrase is "like poorly casy die."

I'm pretty sure it should be "like poorly cast dice" or "like a poorly cast die"? I guess it's just a weird editorial oversight?

No hate on the book BTW I have my gripes about it but overall I'm liking it. I'm just finding a lot of these kinds of mistakes for some reason.

EDIT: The meaning isn't the point here the point is it's missing an article!

u/FarJournalist939 — 1 month ago

I've been reading The Simple Wild by KA Tucker and found these sentences weird. Are these mistakes?

In the first picture, shouldn't it be "stalks"? I know they're pronounced the same so maybe it's just a spelling oversight?

In the second picture, shouldn't it be "do you have a vase that I can put them in?" Or "do you have a vase I can put them in?" Is this just a colloquial way to say it that sounds natural to native speakers, or is it an editing mistake?

u/FarJournalist939 — 1 month ago

What is he saying?

This is from a YouTube short. They're playing a game.

I hear "oh, sometimes you just [____] and you know what, that's fine."

What does he say after just? I hear something like "has to shake it" but that doesn't make any sense.

voca.ro
u/FarJournalist939 — 2 months ago

Does "toiletries bag" sound natural?

This is from The Simple Wild by KA Tucker.

Shouldn't it be "toiletry bags"? Why the plural?

u/FarJournalist939 — 2 months ago

"My dad has woken up when I was still awake a few times." Is this natural in American English?

Does it sound weird? It's supposed to mean that there have been times when my dad woke up and I hadn't gone to sleep yet.

reddit.com
u/FarJournalist939 — 3 months ago

Love her content, but does she sound like a native English speaker?

I've been watching her videos for a while, and even though she mostly sounds American to me, I can kind of hear a foreign accent. I just want to know what she sounds like to Americans.

youtube.com
u/FarJournalist939 — 3 months ago

Is a collab coming?? 😍😍

Gracie just reposted this reel! Do you guys think there's going to be an Olivia feature on the album?

u/FarJournalist939 — 3 months ago

This kind of pants vs These kinds of pants (American English)

If I'm talking about just one single style (say blue jeans), which one sounds more natural? "There's also this kind of pants" or "there's also these kinds of pants"? Google says they're both correct, but I want to hear what native speakers have to say about it

reddit.com
u/FarJournalist939 — 3 months ago

Does this description sound natural for a romance novel? (in American English)

It didn’t take long for Gracie to spot her. Partly because the airport was not very crowded this Thanksgiving morning, but mostly because of her getup. Black pinstripes ran down her white satin blouse, which was neatly tucked into the faux-leather miniskirt. Beneath the open collar of the shirt hung a loose, bright necktie, matching the red ribbon she used to secure her blonde topknot. And of course, high heels—mid-calf, white, red-bottomed boots worn over her sheer tights.

reddit.com
u/FarJournalist939 — 3 months ago

DAE brush their teeth while sitting on the toilet to pee?

I do this all the time in the morning when I'm running late to shave off a minute or two... I was wondering if other people do it too or if I'm just weird. Especially women, but men too if you guys pee while sitting down I guess.

reddit.com
u/FarJournalist939 — 4 months ago

Is "fuckwhit" an acceptable spelling of "fuckwit"?

This is from a book (Check and Mate by Ali Hazelwood). I can't find "fuckwhit" in any online dictionary. "Fuckwit" (with no "h") would make perfect sense here.

Is it a typo/editorial oversight? But like, twice? Or did she misspell it on purpose?

u/FarJournalist939 — 4 months ago

Test to figure out whether someone is a native speaker

I figure that this is somewhat of an unusual question, so let me explain. I'm on a language exchange app called HelloTalk, and I constantly get messages from people who lie about being native English speakers from the US. Some of them are easy to spot from the way they write, but sometimes I just can't really tell.

This is why I thought of creating a simple question that's supposed to be easy for native speakers but hard for advanced learners. Here it is:

>A) It's good to make nice gestures
B) I'm gonna kick you out of the team
C) I suggest you drink more water
D) I arrived to Illinois yesterday

>Which ones are right? Correct the ones that are wrong

What do you guys think? Do you think this question is a good way to tell if someone is lying? Of course no test is perfect. There will be false negatives and false positives. But is it good enough? Any suggestions?

(I'm exclusively looking for native speakers because my goal is to be indistinguishable from one. I'm fully aware that a lot of non-native speakers actually know grammar rules better and are better at explaining them, but that's not what I'm looking for. I'm looking for someone who can tell me if the preposition I used is not the one an American would've used, if I used an unidiomatic word, etc.)

EDIT: Thanks everyone. I'm gonna change sentence A.

reddit.com
u/FarJournalist939 — 4 months ago

"Before she would leave" or "Before she left"

>It was Friday, the last day of classes, and Arthur had asked Gracie to schedule one more tutoring session before [she’d leave/she left] for Fall Break—this time, back at his house.

This is the sentence. Gracie is the POV character for the scene. Are they both correct?

reddit.com
u/FarJournalist939 — 4 months ago

Do you guys cry when you read your manuscript?

I wrote this scene for Chapter 5 of my work in progress and it makes me cry every time I read it. My character is just having a vision of her dad (who recently passed away, but the reader doesn't know this yet) and then she opens her eyes and the vision vanishes. It's so stupid but it gets me every time. IDK. Have you guys ever experienced something similar with a passage you've written? And no my dad isn't dead or anything like that.

reddit.com
u/FarJournalist939 — 4 months ago

Does this sentence sound like something someone from Florida would say?

>“Dude, that’s why it’s so cold in here?” He chuckled. “I thought y’all northerners liked it like this. Tell you what, I’ll give you fifty bucks a month and we set it to a comfortable sixty-nine. Deal?”

reddit.com
u/FarJournalist939 — 4 months ago

Is this sentence correct?

>“I’m saying that the way he worded the clause in the trust concerned with our inheritance, legally if one marriage is deemed fraudulent, the entire clause is nullified.”

This sentence is from a novel (The Paradise Problem by Christina Lauren). Isn't it missing a word? Like, I would expect "I'm saying that given the way he worded the clause..." or "I'm saying that because of the way he worded the clause..."

Is it an editorial oversight or is it actually correct?

reddit.com
u/FarJournalist939 — 4 months ago