Kinky-ish short poem
Hi guys kind of new to this all but just curious if I could get possible "professional" feedback on how to improve it maybe??? Thanks a lot if you can.
It's like a kink but I'm sure,
I need her,
I need her more,
At her soul I knaw,
Down to the core,
The way she makes my heart race,
I need her more,
I like the way she makes me feel for sure,
Her hand around my neck, secure,
To be completely in love with the allure,
I need her more,
When I drop to me Knees I plead for her,
The urge to F**ck her like I want to breed her,
She calls me "pathetic" like a slur,
Trap me in your love potion,
Everything feels like it's in slow motion,
like a blurred memory,
Of her repetitive motion,
As I yearn for her more,
In my heart I am sure,
I need her,
I need her more.