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Any thoughts or feedback on my own original poem?
The galaxy is like a human brain—stars are ideas, thoughts, regrets, and more.
Gas planets are forgotten memories, vast and empty, without ground to hold them.
Comets are sudden moments in our lives—they come fast, then pass away.
Then there are black holes, carrying our trauma, sorrow, and pain—pulling away all our energy and positivity.
u/Flaky-Independent873 — 3 days ago