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Mona Lisa Overdrive -  Meet Jenny Feathers, an antagonistic cheerleader

Mona Lisa Overdrive - Meet Jenny Feathers, an antagonistic cheerleader

She is one of the members of the Divine Sons. They are ponies capable of using magic without being unicorns, and they possess greater strength and speed than the average pony.

Each member has a specific theme to make them even easier to identify. In Jenny's case, she is a cheerleader, a pegasus who used to be part of the Enclave.

Her fighting style combines taekwondo with gymnastics, which means she rarely uses her front hooves. She mostly uses them to wield her chainsaw sword, which Jenny also uses as a boomerang. She dislikes using firearms, so if one of her opponents carries one, she throws her sword, and its sharpness cuts the weapon in half, rendering it useless. She enjoys watching her opponents suffer while they admire her youth and beauty.

One of her special attacks involves her suggestively spanking herself when she strikes her pose on her hind legs, leaning forward, her cutie mark, mane, and tail glow, and several afterimages of her materialize to perform combos on her opponent until she finishes them off herself, sending them flying with a series of spinning kicks.

Her cutie mark is two crossed lollipops. That's her favorite candy and she's almost always licking one and making bubbles with them.

I'm not a big fan of rap, but I think this song fits her perfectly for her final fight: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7-X4W3B83UA&list=OLAK5uy_lEFx4hCF01naoTZRZ5Tp-Y7AJMcOePsw0&index=10

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Mona Lisa Overdrive Concept Art - Bubblesigh signature move: Flying Flank 🍑

This is one of the moves she uses in some fights that will be specifically comedic. She's aware that her butt is big, and when it impacts her enemies directly, they fall to the ground stunned, and some even get nosebleeds. It works for both genders, stallion and mare; nopony can resist Bubblesigh's charms.

This attack is executed when she runs toward her target, quickly turns around, giving them her back, and propels herself with her front hooves. There are also other variations she'll use depending on the situation.

I was also thinking about a main theme for Bubbles. I think "Chronic Future - Static On The Radio" from the album (Lines in My Face) would be perfect for her, for a more rebellious version of Puppysmiles.

Her arc is more comedic to contrast with the rest and avoid making the Suicidal Teenagers' arcs feel too similar thematically, although there will be a bit of darkness from time to time.

The reason I added this, besides the obvious fetishistic elements, is also because I like to add a bit of the kind of comedy you see in ecchi anime and creative ways of sexualizing female characters. In another arc, for example, there's a panty cannon—literally, as it sounds—and I think it gives my fanfic a bit of personality while satisfying my needs and making the readers laugh. It's a win-win situation.

Now, the status of MLO: I'm writing it. I'm at 12k words so far, but now that I'm also focusing on art, the chapters will take even longer to update.

u/Foreign_Ad1869 — 4 days ago

Mona Lisa Overdrive - Constantine Concept Art - The most hardest MLP OC to draw.

I don't have a tablet yet, and I'm a beginner artist. I wanted to do this design on my own, without commissioning, to test my skills. It could have been better, I admit, but right now I'm limited in resources and only have a small, low-quality sketchbook, so I did the best I could with this design.

Constantine is the final antagonist of MLO. I didn't just want her to be the strongest character; I wanted to experiment and see how I could create such a complex and difficult design, to step outside the norm.

She's inspired by Orphan from Final Fantasy XIII, which I consider, design-wise, one of the most badass bosses I've ever seen. I didn't want to just copy and paste, so I had to improvise some parts to make her look more appropriate for MLP and the context of my fanfic.

Basically, she's a cosmic being who lives inside the Harmony Tree. I think her true appearance is never shown in the show, so in my headcanon, I believe she should look like this: a kind of giant clockwork figure with multiple meanings.

The Mane 6, the Elements of Harmony, are very important ponies to Equestria. The fact that they died sooner than planned caused Constantine to take this form. Their mouths and faces are circles to simulate the suffering they endured, and as some may have noticed, they are in the order they appeared in the first episode: Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Fluttershy, along with their cutie marks.

The face in the center takes the form of Celestia, with her star-shaped eye, giving it an angelic and beautiful touch that fits with the tropes of "Eldritch Abomination" and "Angelic Abomination".

The sun and moon shapes that form part of her body signify Celestia's role as the one who raises the sun and Luna's role as the one who raises the moon. This mechanism rotates like a clock, simulating the day-night cycle.

This is her first form; she has two more, which are more difficult, especially the third. With my current skills, I don't think I can do it because her body is made of constellations, and I would have to draw each one individually until I complete her entire body. Perhaps I'll leave it for later when my skills are more polished.

u/Foreign_Ad1869 — 21 days ago

Mona Lisa Overdrive - Meet Bubblesigh and Melody Marshmallow by Hoffee

Don't think my large cast of MCs was going to be without moe characters and bratty fillies; I'd be lying to myself.

They haven't appeared in any chapters yet, but they were planned almost from the beginning, and I couldn't put them on the cover because I was short on cash.

Bubblesigh Days: Puppy's twin sister. I was going to use Puppy herself, but I wanted to have a little more freedom and decided it was better for Puppy to be in the afterlife with her mother, without changing her story too much. I added a forgotten relative that Puppy couldn't remember because of the bad memories she had with Bubbles before the war.

Melody Marshmallow: Leader of a group of orphanage fillies called the Shaolin Clan. They ride roller skates and vandalize the city by painting graffiti to mark their territory. They have a rivalry with another group of fillies. They probably steal toys and bottle caps most of the time, but they have a code: never commit murder.

When you put those two together in the same place, it's almost impossible for them to get along, and as you can see, they're almost always fighting, remembering how Bubblesigh used to treat Puppy when they weren't radioactive ghouls.

u/Foreign_Ad1869 — 2 months ago

Chapter 2 (rewritten) Mona Lisa Overdrive - You Can Put a Label On a Lifestyle

Getting closer to my goal of writing the most detailed Stable ever.

With the length of a light novel.

I won't lie, sometimes my body craves a bit of wasteland action, but writing exclusively about a Stable, a small place, might not be as interesting and could be a niche idea. However, I'm experimenting to see how much potential can be squeezed from such confined spaces.

I'll take a break and answer any questions or suggestions for improving my writing. I'm excited to read them.

The only thing I won't read or accept is requests to censor my work. Beyond that, I'll do everything I can to improve it.

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